One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I studied the artwork before I scrolled down and read. I felt so sorry for the raven. Winter in one's heart would not be good. It would be a cold heart. Again, thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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I studied the artwork before I scrolled down and read. I felt so sorry for the raven. Winter in one's heart would not be good. It would be a cold heart. Again, thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures were definitely interesting for it appears in the first one that the tree bough grew within the raven. It was interesting because your words said the same. The second showed a simple raven. Very well done and sadly yet greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures were definitely interesting for it appears in the first one that the tree bough grew within the raven. It was interesting because your words said the same. The second showed a simple raven. Very well done and sadly yet greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend. I'm happy you like it. Have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You as well, Gypsy. You are so welcome.
Comment from Mark Schardine
I believe that ekphrastic poems are inspired by a work of art, and this image can seem metaphorical. It suggests that even the raven, often presented as a harbinger of death, will itself suffer greatly.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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I believe that ekphrastic poems are inspired by a work of art, and this image can seem metaphorical. It suggests that even the raven, often presented as a harbinger of death, will itself suffer greatly.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Ekphrastic poem- excellent picture presentation of the crow dematerializing on a branch- cool- poem has good word count and connection between lines - good job AP
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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I like your Ekphrastic poem- excellent picture presentation of the crow dematerializing on a branch- cool- poem has good word count and connection between lines - good job AP
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend. I'm happy you like it. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That's so sad. If "winter is in his heart" then the joy is gone and he has given up on life. I guess that's why he has melted into the withered bough which also expresses winter.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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That's so sad. If "winter is in his heart" then the joy is gone and he has given up on life. I guess that's why he has melted into the withered bough which also expresses winter.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you, big sister. I liked the picture. I was busy with Atticus yesterday and by the time I was done with the dishes it was 8:45 pm. I had 15 minutes to write two haiku to meet my challenge of 2 haiku a day. LoL I made it.
Love,
Marival ❤️
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Woohoo! You did great!
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Thank you, all the practice helps. I probably dream in haiku. 😆 lol
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That is a chilling picture and winter is hard on the birds. Your poem has a ghostly and eerie feel to it here, I enjoyed your clever words, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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That is a chilling picture and winter is hard on the birds. Your poem has a ghostly and eerie feel to it here, I enjoyed your clever words, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy