Be Wee With Bea Part 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Learning to Begin Again"Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.
10 total reviews
Comment from Nicki Nance
Just lovely. The story is poignant and well written. From your notes I see that the depth of your central character reflects her being Infused with real life.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Just lovely. The story is poignant and well written. From your notes I see that the depth of your central character reflects her being Infused with real life.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your lovely review. I'm glad you appreciated it.If you are interested in reading any of the previous chapters, feel free & no need to leave a review. Just enjoy.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Liz, yes this does reflect how life throws us a curve and we have to start all over again. I've been in that situation so I can fully understand the lesson being learned from this chapter. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Hi Liz, yes this does reflect how life throws us a curve and we have to start all over again. I've been in that situation so I can fully understand the lesson being learned from this chapter. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad it becomes a healing chapter.
Comment from aryr
This was a great continuation chapter, Liz. Bea and her shadow sought many questions and answers to those questions. They definitely had the right to know. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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This was a great continuation chapter, Liz. Bea and her shadow sought many questions and answers to those questions. They definitely had the right to know. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your delightful review. I'm so glad you appreciated it.
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You are so welcome, Liz.
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***Warm smile***
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Often, we seem to have to start over. This is a good lesson for young children.
These give her an idea to share with Willow. (gave, this post is written in past tense and give is present tense.)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Often, we seem to have to start over. This is a good lesson for young children.
These give her an idea to share with Willow. (gave, this post is written in past tense and give is present tense.)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your observing review. I'm experimenting with using the historically present tense suggested for me to use.
Comment from eliz100
In my opinion, you did a great job describing depression at the 4-6 grade level. I also liked the descriptive words you used to describe nature, "the ball in the sky." I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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In my opinion, you did a great job describing depression at the 4-6 grade level. I also liked the descriptive words you used to describe nature, "the ball in the sky." I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your delightful review. I'm so glad you appreciated it.
Comment from lyenochka
I enjoyed the poetic qualities of this chapter. Bea has the ability to listen to the flowers' story and believe in the hope they they speak about. It's good that she had Willow's wisdom and followed through her exercises and kept up her noticing and was good to herself. I wonder what the Maker is asking to take the risk of crossing the bridge. I'm sure she'll overcome her fears.
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed the poetic qualities of this chapter. Bea has the ability to listen to the flowers' story and believe in the hope they they speak about. It's good that she had Willow's wisdom and followed through her exercises and kept up her noticing and was good to herself. I wonder what the Maker is asking to take the risk of crossing the bridge. I'm sure she'll overcome her fears.
Minor formatting comment: The first five lines are single-spaced and the rest are not. The font changes to bold part way.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your delightful review. I'm glad you appreciate it.
I do not know what is wrong with the script on this. I've work on it & thought I had it right, but still 'no' I must have done some different that I thought would make them all the same darkness, but 'no'. And you say still 'no'? I guess I'm just letting it go. I have no other solution.
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It's fine. Perhaps it's just some FS gremlin. If it looks great on your own document off FS, then it's fine.
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It will all come out in the wash when it is published, which should be by the end of the year.
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Wow! You're on a roll! Two publications in a year!
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Actually it is 4 ...Bea 1& 2
Traffic & The Tor of Glastonbury...You've read & reviewed them all...lol
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Comment from Julie Lau
This is a pleasant story, very well written, with deeper messages within it, but all of a beneficial nature. I'm so glad you chose a bear as a main character, as they have all been special to me (mostly of the stuffed teddy bear variety). I do also have a special liking for sun bears: they have some endearing ways. All the best for your book,
Julie Lau
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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This is a pleasant story, very well written, with deeper messages within it, but all of a beneficial nature. I'm so glad you chose a bear as a main character, as they have all been special to me (mostly of the stuffed teddy bear variety). I do also have a special liking for sun bears: they have some endearing ways. All the best for your book,
Julie Lau
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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What a delightful review. Thank you. I will definitely nominate you next month. I'm writing it down so I will remember.
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Oh, lovely! Thank you, Liz!
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very beautiful story. Charming and mostly touching. In fact, it conveys a great parallel with the human quest. I always like stories where animals are pictured with feelings and emotions, like you have done it here.
Great job!!!
Mario
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Very beautiful story. Charming and mostly touching. In fact, it conveys a great parallel with the human quest. I always like stories where animals are pictured with feelings and emotions, like you have done it here.
Great job!!!
Mario
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Wow, thank you for such a uplifting review. I will make sure you are nominated next month.
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Thank you!!!
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***Smile***
Comment from JT traveller
I particularly enjoyed Bea's wonderment at Springs arrival. Another beautiful write. Your story is coming along so well and it brings me joy to follow the adventures of Bea and her friends. Thank you. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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I particularly enjoyed Bea's wonderment at Springs arrival. Another beautiful write. Your story is coming along so well and it brings me joy to follow the adventures of Bea and her friends. Thank you. Jacqueline
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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This is such a sweet review. I'm glad you've joined Bea's world.
Comment from country ranch writer
Enjoyed this one we all seem to get lost down and out sometimes and it takes Ashlie to get things back o n track when we lose some one and journey job. Nothing stays the same things just keep changing around us.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Enjoyed this one we all seem to get lost down and out sometimes and it takes Ashlie to get things back o n track when we lose some one and journey job. Nothing stays the same things just keep changing around us.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your great insightful review. You are so right. I'm glad you appreciate the message.
