The Girl
A chance encounter3 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 50 Word Story contest. The text needs to be one or two sizes larger for easier reading. The story is stated with clarity and is easily understood. You did a good job with a few words in telling a solid and relatable story. A visual would enhance your presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry into the 50 Word Story contest. The text needs to be one or two sizes larger for easier reading. The story is stated with clarity and is easily understood. You did a good job with a few words in telling a solid and relatable story. A visual would enhance your presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you, I?ll remember that! :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, you had me there, I thought this was a match in heaven, but a name is just a name and really means very little when it comes to love and marriage, a poignant write full of humour, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Ha ha ha, you had me there, I thought this was a match in heaven, but a name is just a name and really means very little when it comes to love and marriage, a poignant write full of humour, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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So true! No sparks were flying over the Grimes name. Thank you for reading and I?m glad you got a kick out of it! :)
Comment from jessizero
Your chance encounter that led to absolutely nothing was surprisingly funny. The ending was perfect. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Your chance encounter that led to absolutely nothing was surprisingly funny. The ending was perfect. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you, true story :)
