Exasperation
50 words8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous fifty-word story, Exasperation, has the proper word count and explains some of the trouble my wife has understanding how to use scissors and drive cars.
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This humorous fifty-word story, Exasperation, has the proper word count and explains some of the trouble my wife has understanding how to use scissors and drive cars.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
Comment from Amanda Black
Interesting take. I like that you made it a conversation but I confess, I'm not sure if this is one of Santa's elves talking about a toy, or one of God's angels talking about a person. The image leans one way, but the words lean another.
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Interesting take. I like that you made it a conversation but I confess, I'm not sure if this is one of Santa's elves talking about a toy, or one of God's angels talking about a person. The image leans one way, but the words lean another.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hehehe ... Great entry for the Humorous 50 Word Story writing prompt contest.
The story grabbed my interest. The dialogue is believable and has a funny ending.
Good luck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Hehehe ... Great entry for the Humorous 50 Word Story writing prompt contest.
The story grabbed my interest. The dialogue is believable and has a funny ending.
Good luck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
Comment from w.j.debi
Oh, dear it looks like someone is in trouble for a huge mistake. And it is too late to correct it ?! I wonder what the consequences are? Great use of dialog only.
Best of luck in the contest.
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Oh, dear it looks like someone is in trouble for a huge mistake. And it is too late to correct it ?! I wonder what the consequences are? Great use of dialog only.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Great insight into the inner workings of creation!!! I had to read it twice before getting the whole meaning, so subtle it was!!
Great job and good luck!
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Great insight into the inner workings of creation!!! I had to read it twice before getting the whole meaning, so subtle it was!!
Great job and good luck!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
Comment from jmdg1954
This is a hood contributing entry into the challenge.
Great photo to accompany the funny story.
I don't think God will be mad after all. He'll be ambidextrous.,,
Best of luck. John
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This is a hood contributing entry into the challenge.
Great photo to accompany the funny story.
I don't think God will be mad after all. He'll be ambidextrous.,,
Best of luck. John
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
I'm not sure we worry so much about left and right. Although the left in Latin is 'sinistra' and fighting on the left in battle was seen as unlucky. The final line is excellent!
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I'm not sure we worry so much about left and right. Although the left in Latin is 'sinistra' and fighting on the left in battle was seen as unlucky. The final line is excellent!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think there are a few lefties that need converting into righties in life, specially in the Whitehouse! This is where the concentration of mistakes are happening right now, ha ha ha, fun post, love Dolly x
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I think there are a few lefties that need converting into righties in life, specially in the Whitehouse! This is where the concentration of mistakes are happening right now, ha ha ha, fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
