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5 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Loved the alliteration used particularly obsorbing, occidental and some internal rhyme used in your 'pathways' free verse challenge Lea. Our souls journey depends on the choices we make, which roads we choose. Well done, cheers.
Valda
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Loved the alliteration used particularly obsorbing, occidental and some internal rhyme used in your 'pathways' free verse challenge Lea. Our souls journey depends on the choices we make, which roads we choose. Well done, cheers.
Valda
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much Pearl I appreciate the time you take to have a look at my work and For your kind comments on greatly appreciative! I hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment from JT traveller
Outstanding. The juxtaposition between crawling and break neck speed is a spectacular line. Great topic choice about hard decisions. And not one coin flip! Will destiny decide, will fate steer you to the right? Great presentation too. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Outstanding. The juxtaposition between crawling and break neck speed is a spectacular line. Great topic choice about hard decisions. And not one coin flip! Will destiny decide, will fate steer you to the right? Great presentation too. Jacqueline
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you i'm glad you like it! I find comment and a fine review and i'm very grateful as always for Time and effort you put in to reading my words!
Enjoy your evening!
Comment from damommy
Life is full of crossroads, and we must pray we go the right direction. Listening to that small voice inside, as you mentioned, usually keeps us on the straight and narrow we should be on.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Life is full of crossroads, and we must pray we go the right direction. Listening to that small voice inside, as you mentioned, usually keeps us on the straight and narrow we should be on.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Absolutely intelligent agree thank you very much for this great review and for your time and for kind words. I hope you have a wonderful afternoon!
Comment from patcelaw
We all come to crossroads in her life. When we do come to the crossroads, we need to stop and think about which way is going to be best for us to go. Many missed the right path because they do not take the time to study out the consequences of the paths they choose. Patricia.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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We all come to crossroads in her life. When we do come to the crossroads, we need to stop and think about which way is going to be best for us to go. Many missed the right path because they do not take the time to study out the consequences of the paths they choose. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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So very true....thank you Pat for your review and keen insight! Very knowledgeable comments I thank you. Hope have a great day
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We might not like to take a journey down a dark path but in some instances we are forced to and we need courage to combat the challenges we face. A poignant write Lea, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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We might not like to take a journey down a dark path but in some instances we are forced to and we need courage to combat the challenges we face. A poignant write Lea, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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As ever I thank you for your responses and for your reviews and for your kind comments and for the gentle way you pass suggestions.
Thank you very much I appreciate you!