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The Way of the Cross

Jesus carries his cross

10 total reviews 
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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A well researched loop poem which tells the story of the journey and crucifixion of Jesus Christ -Saviour of all mankind.
The image adds gravity to the heinous acts which He was beset by.
Mankind has so much to be thankful for, and yet still turn away from
belief.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
    Hello Shirley, Thanks for reading. We walk by faith. Jesus said we shouldn't ask for signs and yet His mother Mary gave a sign at Fatima, as promised she covered the face of the sun. She showed herself to three children.This is well documented. Blessings, Kay and...Happy Easter my friend. K xx
reply by Shirley E Kennedy on 29-Mar-2023
    You're welcome
Comment from Wendy G
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A very beautiful Easter poem, showing the enormous price He paid for our ransom and reconciliation. You expressed it very meaningfully and I have read it a few times to meditate on it. Thank you for sharing this one.
Wendy

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Hi Wendy, Thanks so much for reading (took me forever to write) so glad you could meditate on it.
    I'm going to write another He has Risen. Love, Kay xx
reply by Wendy G on 27-Mar-2023
    Looking forward to reading it soon.
Comment from lyenochka
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You covered that tragic day called Good Friday well. You even covered Veronica whom I didn't know about but it was pointed out to me on the Via Dolorosa in Jerusalem. Beautifully narrated in your looping poem!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Hello my friend Lena, Thanks so much for reading. I had to do a lot of research (which I love) important to me to get His message out there. Love, Kay xx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A desperate scene here filled with horror of bloodshed and tears, a path of hate we have seen often. Your loop is appropriate for the coming celebration, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Hello my friend Dolly, Thanks so much for your kind review. Took me ages and research. I did not know His path through Judea took nearly two hours! Love, Kay xx
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 27-Mar-2023
    Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
    Happy Easter my friend. Love, Kay.
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 29-Mar-2023
    Same to you, here in Spain they adore Easter and have a big celebration x x x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    Are you on holidays or living in Spain? Yes, it is a very Catholic country and have big parades and worship. Must be great to hear the music and see the colour!
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 30-Mar-2023
    I am on a long holiday x x x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    Eh, Senorita donna forget your sombrero! Our FS writer Sandra lived in Spain until her hubby died of cancer she then came back to UK. I believe it is hotter than Oz?
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 30-Mar-2023
    It is about 30 degrees celsius today, we have a Calima which cloud with sand in it which makes it feel very hot x x x
Comment from kahpot
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And rise He did, a wonderful description "cobblestone and the anguish of the people" of this journey of a Man who bled for all, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
    G'Day from Oz! Thank you so much for reading. Glad you liked my descriptions. K xx
Comment from mermaids
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Excellent poem for the Easter season. You have vivid descriptions of Jesus' journey of carrying the cross. We forget how difficult that was and how brutal his death was. It is important to remember Him as he died for us. Your words speak to the reader.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
    Hello my friend, Thanks for reading. I try to reach out to those who would rather have an Easter egg than remember the Lord. Hugs and love, Kay xx
Comment from aryr
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This was an endearing picture of Christ and His cross, Kay. Endearing because the cross was His to bear. Your words told the story very well. Great job. Blessings n Hugs!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
    Hello my friend, Many thanks for reading. It took forever to write! Big bear hugs back at ya! Love, Kay.
reply by aryr on 25-Mar-2023
    You are so very welcome, Kay-love you!
Comment from Heather Knight
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I don't remember what this kind of poem is called, but I find it difficult to write. You've done a very good job though.
I think I didn't know the mean of Golgotha.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
    Hello Heather, Thanks for reading. Took me ages of research. It is a Loop poem, has me hooked now. I love to write it. Apparently it is supposed to rhyme, I find that overkill! Blessings, Kay xx
reply by Heather Knight on 28-Mar-2023
    Thanks for reminding me of the name.x
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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This is a very well put together piece. I can appreciate the work the thought the care and the hope that you have put into this. It is a wonderful right with a beautiful background and a very compelling picture.
I see no issues with grammar sentence structure punctuation spelling all those things are spot on.
It is evident that there is much talent in your writing and you give it to God's while you're doing it. I wonderful thing I hope you have a great day and an awesome night!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
    Hello Lea, Yes, I write for Him to reach those who don't believe in Jesus. It takes me ages to write in the Loop style but I love it - a challenge. Love, Kay.
reply by Lea Tonin1 on 25-Mar-2023
    It is a challenge absolutely you have mastered it! Jesus and god are absolutely real I know it balls to bones
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
    Hee, Hee, you have some funny sayings over there. Balls to bones I have never heard. American?
reply by Lea Tonin1 on 25-Mar-2023
    No actually canadian on from the west coast of british columbia just above the u s order
reply by Lea Tonin1 on 25-Mar-2023
    I have another poem on there. It's called the brave soul. It talks about the soul's journey as opposed to the bodies. Written in a very unique way I'd be curious to know what your take on. It would be if you have a moment. Thank you have a great day
Comment from patcelaw
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It puzzles me that anyone could absolutely hear the story of how Jesus died on the cross could turn away from him, knowing how much he suffered for us to pay the penalty for our many sins. Patricia.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
    Hello Patricia, Thanks for reading. Unless we believe in Him and the times that brought Him to a horrid death; the non believer's think His life and death are mere fairytales. We know better! Love, Kay xx