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Life Happens

Being casual with life has consequences

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Comment from jessizero
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Eek! This is a very unsettling (yet entertaining) story. I wonder what would have happened next. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023


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Comment from patcelaw
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They're definitely can't be consequences to the decisions we make in life and this is a perfect one. Really enjoyed it. I love getting a bit of a chuckle out of it. Patricia.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023


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Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! The perfect life turns into a nightmare! Too funny. We never know the consequences of all those sperm and egg donations. Hopefully, the children are born into wealthy families and wouldn't want parental support! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023


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Comment from Ginda Simpson
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I guess one needs to be more discerning in how they choose to earn money. This is a funny story and is a good entry for the dribble flash fiction. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023


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Comment from jmdg1954
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LMOA....
This just set up the rest of my afternoon. I can't stop laughing!
I'm envisioning a person opening his front door to the chaotic nonsense you described...

Fantastic post. Best of luck in the contest.
John

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 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023


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Comment from royowen
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Yes, I think that a man can be a biological father to many, many children, as it seems Parnell did. But is seems to me that it's going to be a whole lot more interesting now. Beautifully written my friend Stan, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023


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reply by royowen on 28-Mar-2023
    Welcome