In the Rain
Humanities Poetry Contest Entry4 total reviews
Comment from K.I. Betancur
Very heart-warming!
I don't know if you meant "drew near" in the third stanza.
That aside, it doesn't take away from your work at all. Well done, and I appreciate you sharing!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Very heart-warming!
I don't know if you meant "drew near" in the third stanza.
That aside, it doesn't take away from your work at all. Well done, and I appreciate you sharing!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the great review and stars, KIB. You're actually the only one to mention that. Yes, drew near would be more fitting there. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron
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Thanks for writing!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
All that is missing in this story is Patty Duke (The Miracle Worker), I think.
Very well done, and you should garner deep support for a tale well told. Keep on typing on, friend.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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All that is missing in this story is Patty Duke (The Miracle Worker), I think.
Very well done, and you should garner deep support for a tale well told. Keep on typing on, friend.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the great review, Tom. I had to look her up and still don't really know who she is. Lol. I appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great day.
Comment from Emily Barrett
I love how this poem shows the effect of compassion in a situation versus letting indifference get in the way. This story is really touching and could be influential to any who may judge anyone who is homeless or not doing very well. Great job!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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I love how this poem shows the effect of compassion in a situation versus letting indifference get in the way. This story is really touching and could be influential to any who may judge anyone who is homeless or not doing very well. Great job!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the great review, Emily. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great weekend.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a wonderful heartfelt story and I wish it was true. Homeless people have deep seated problems that are not as easily fixed as in your poem but I loved the sentiment here. Your poem is well rhymed and metered and your words well chosen and I wish I had a six for you. I reckon this is a winner for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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This is a wonderful heartfelt story and I wish it was true. Homeless people have deep seated problems that are not as easily fixed as in your poem but I loved the sentiment here. Your poem is well rhymed and metered and your words well chosen and I wish I had a six for you. I reckon this is a winner for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Dolly. Yes, some homeless people just want to live their lives like that and aren't interested in trying to better themselves. It's sad. I really appreciate the big six offer and kind comments, Dolly. Have a great weekend and thank you again.
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You are welcome, have a lovely weekend x
