Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh, so Mike didn't have a hangover from the St. Patrick's Day party and then he heard about another party and then joined in that one, too? Hope his girlfriend is up to it! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023

Hellow Helen. Thank you :)

Comment from Sarah Das Gupta

Excellent

You've done very well with fifty words! It is amazing how you can express much in few words. It is good practice. Often we over-write. This makes you consider each word!

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023

Thank you :)

reply by Sarah Das Gupta on 31-Mar-2023

All best wishes!

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

Well, this obviously made sense to Dolly. Maybe I'm just dense, but I don't get it. No offense intended, but sometimes these bits of dribble flash fiction just sail right over my head. I know they are hard to write and tell a complete story, so I've given up trying. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023

Thank you :)

reply by Mary Shifman on 31-Mar-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I love the spontaneity here and this is all down to good advertising and people who love a good party, I enjoyed your flash fiction Alicia, I was entertained, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023

Hellow Dolly. I miss you. Hope all is going great. Thank you. Love always your friends, alicia seecharan

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 31-Mar-2023

Yes I am good Alicia, thank you for asking, and I hope you are also well x x x