Virga
a 5-7-5 poem2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I did not know the word "virga," so thank you for teaching me that. I like your last line especially. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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I did not know the word "virga," so thank you for teaching me that. I like your last line especially. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thanks for the positive review!
Comment from w.j.debi
Your metaphor is well executed. Those unfulfilled ambitions are like the rain that starts to fall but never completes its descent to the ground.
Excellent presentation including colors and artwork.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Your metaphor is well executed. Those unfulfilled ambitions are like the rain that starts to fall but never completes its descent to the ground.
Excellent presentation including colors and artwork.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the review. It's always encouraging when someone understands exactly what I meant!
