Taste of My Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "4 the Sake of Halle Berry "The Pathway to Pain and Misery
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Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
This is an absorbing fantasy which is almost believable! You handle the analysis of inner thoughts very well which adds to the reader's willingness to suspend her/his disbelief! I can see the temptation of sharing a hot tub with this famous star!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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This is an absorbing fantasy which is almost believable! You handle the analysis of inner thoughts very well which adds to the reader's willingness to suspend her/his disbelief! I can see the temptation of sharing a hot tub with this famous star!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Yes, I will be finishing this sometime soon as I've been extremely busy with my other projects and books.
Thanks for stopping by.
Doctor Ricky
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Best wishes from UK
Comment from kahpot
Who wouldn't offer Halle Berry a day in the hot tub, though I think with all her money I would be the one gate crashing her hotel, I am learning a lot about this wonderful actress, now I wait for the next, a wonderful read****kahpot
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Who wouldn't offer Halle Berry a day in the hot tub, though I think with all her money I would be the one gate crashing her hotel, I am learning a lot about this wonderful actress, now I wait for the next, a wonderful read****kahpot
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Yes, this will be completed soon. I've been extremely busy with all my other projects and books.
Thanks kahpot.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I happen to think Halle Berry is one of the most beautiful women of the World.
And, you need to realize that they seemed to hypnotize! (you can omit 'that')
Please God Don't Make This Be Love! (comma after 'God')
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She wire Many bracelets and earrings. (wears????)
'Dear God not again?' (comma after 'God')
Yes perhaps there was something going on that most people would not understand. (comma after 'yes')
God get me a knife and put me out of my Misery? (comma after 'God')
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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I happen to think Halle Berry is one of the most beautiful women of the World.
And, you need to realize that they seemed to hypnotize! (you can omit 'that')
Please God Don't Make This Be Love! (comma after 'God')
...
She wire Many bracelets and earrings. (wears????)
'Dear God not again?' (comma after 'God')
Yes perhaps there was something going on that most people would not understand. (comma after 'yes')
God get me a knife and put me out of my Misery? (comma after 'God')
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thanks Barbara. Wanted a time when I see these edits. I go and change the sentencing around like I just did. But I'm in a hot tub so I can't work too much right now and Atlantic City.
Doctor Ricky
