One Man's Calling
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Comment from Wendy G
I'm not normally a reader of westerns but I'll give it a good go, and try to understand the colloquial expressions. Lol. Glad to see here that Ben was wise in his onthe spot decision making, and in the right place at the right time. Also the power of prayer, or rather the prayer of a faithful man and God's powerful answer.
And also the spiritual guidance Ben gave. Well written, as always.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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I'm not normally a reader of westerns but I'll give it a good go, and try to understand the colloquial expressions. Lol. Glad to see here that Ben was wise in his onthe spot decision making, and in the right place at the right time. Also the power of prayer, or rather the prayer of a faithful man and God's powerful answer.
And also the spiritual guidance Ben gave. Well written, as always.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you.
Ben's just a man trying to follow God's leading. He could just as easily be an Australian banker, but the American western frontier type gave him better mobility and more credible opportunity. But maybe the same character 'could' be modernized. You just gave me a thought. Thank you!
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I did?!
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, we see another side to Ben. He's a man of faith and prayer and he already made a difference in the lives of Arville and Hector. Hector was ready to hear that advice.
He live and he might be (He might live?) Is this some regional dialect grammar?
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Ah, we see another side to Ben. He's a man of faith and prayer and he already made a difference in the lives of Arville and Hector. Hector was ready to hear that advice.
He live and he might be (He might live?) Is this some regional dialect grammar?
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your very nice review.
I suppose it is a dialectic issue. 'He live and ...' I hear that arrangement as normal, but looking at it in print ... hmmm
The meaning is clear to me - If he lives, then ...
I'll have to think on it. thanks for pointing it out.
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No worries. If it's dialectal, keep it!
Comment from eliz100
I enjoyed reading this chapter. You have done an excellent job describing God's messages to the preacher to keep moving on. The preacher prays for a good outcome for the sick; and God makes that happen. I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any room for improvement.Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed reading this chapter. You have done an excellent job describing God's messages to the preacher to keep moving on. The preacher prays for a good outcome for the sick; and God makes that happen. I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any room for improvement.Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from papa55mike
That's a couple of blessings shared, and I don't think anybody saw it but Ben. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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That's a couple of blessings shared, and I don't think anybody saw it but Ben. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
I'm enjoying your story. It sounds as though Ben is more than a mere preacher. He seems to have the gift of healing as well as the gift of prophecy. I'll be looking forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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I'm enjoying your story. It sounds as though Ben is more than a mere preacher. He seems to have the gift of healing as well as the gift of prophecy. I'll be looking forward to reading more.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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He has a 'calling'. (smiley face here)
Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Earl Corp
It's nice to see another western writer here on Fanstory. This looks like it has a good start to a book. You brought up a couple of points I wasn't aware of like John Deere predated the Civil War. I wasn't aware Civil War-era soldiers ran to Canada. I can't wait to read more of this story.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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It's nice to see another western writer here on Fanstory. This looks like it has a good start to a book. You brought up a couple of points I wasn't aware of like John Deere predated the Civil War. I wasn't aware Civil War-era soldiers ran to Canada. I can't wait to read more of this story.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your very nice review.
