Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Good

This is a good entry into the 1-2-3-4 poem contest. The text is a good size for reading. I like it centered on the visual. The message is presented with clarity until you get to the word hear. You have used the wrong homophone. You need the word "here". That's why I gave you a score of a four. The visual fits okay. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023

Thank you for the four stars, even though I made a mistake.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 24-Mar-2023

You are welcome. If the poem had been longer with that error, I would have given you a 5.

Comment from Debra JT

Good

Beautiful poem and beautiful sentiment but please correct the misspelling of "here." These kinds of misspellings don't show up when you use spell check. If not for that I would gladly give it five stars. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023

Thank you for having my back, unfortunately it was too late for me to correct it. I came in last.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a good lesson in being grateful for small mercies and to see the world around us and know that we have found paradise, I believe I have found it too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023

Thank you so much.