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Comment from JT traveller
Magical. A wonderfully crafted poem that speaks such truths. Reflecting on one's sense and inner thoughts brings about some form of enlightenment. The mirror is but a metaphor for a spiritual exploration of the inner self. Great poem Lea.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Magical. A wonderfully crafted poem that speaks such truths. Reflecting on one's sense and inner thoughts brings about some form of enlightenment. The mirror is but a metaphor for a spiritual exploration of the inner self. Great poem Lea.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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You are very intuitive with large insight you are absolutely right!
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You are very intuitive with large insight you are absolutely right! I thank you for a wonderful review as always you're very kind and your suggestions are made with respect and I appreciate that so very much. So I hope you have an awesome evening and of course I'm always happy to read your very talented poetry too!
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Hello from Flores!!! I have missed our chats. I wish I could share some photos with you. It has been a wild 4 days! Take care, Jacqueline 😊
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Would love to see your pics!
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I just sent some!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem is written wonderfully. I was wondering if you wanted the print light and then two lines dark. Many times, when this happens to me, I adjust the font size or print font to correct the issue.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Your poem is written wonderfully. I was wondering if you wanted the print light and then two lines dark. Many times, when this happens to me, I adjust the font size or print font to correct the issue.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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O k I get it...I'll have to play with it a little bit more.
Thank you so much for this video. I really appreciate it and for your suggestions also very helpful. I thank you for that too and hope you have a great night!
Comment from royowen
The metaphoric mirror is a marvellous place to look in for correction and adjustment in one's life and character, but at this stage of my life, my physical appearance doesn't encourage much. This is beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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The metaphoric mirror is a marvellous place to look in for correction and adjustment in one's life and character, but at this stage of my life, my physical appearance doesn't encourage much. This is beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much Roy. I appreciate your kind comments appreciate your time and your review.
Hope you have sunshine where your at!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
You did a great job with the theme of reflections, not just those in the mirror, but the truth of inner reflections that show us who we really are. Good rhyming.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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You did a great job with the theme of reflections, not just those in the mirror, but the truth of inner reflections that show us who we really are. Good rhyming.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you and so glad you like it! I appreciate you taking the time to read it and offer your kind comments!
Thank you again I hope you have a great afternoon!
Comment from Emily Barrett
I really like your use of the absence of articles in this piece. It really creates a mysterious tone that lends itself to the style. I especially like the last stanza. Very nice!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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I really like your use of the absence of articles in this piece. It really creates a mysterious tone that lends itself to the style. I especially like the last stanza. Very nice!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you how much I really glad you like it! Thank you so much for stopping by reading my poem. I appreciate your kind comment thankful too I hope you have a wonderful afternoon.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I really enjoyed this poem, so skilfully written with such a message of self-help and self-belief. Particularly love the second stanza which steadies us in this world of fast paced, self-obsessed living. many thanks, Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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I really enjoyed this poem, so skilfully written with such a message of self-help and self-belief. Particularly love the second stanza which steadies us in this world of fast paced, self-obsessed living. many thanks, Debbie
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much Debbie I'm so glad you liked it! For you and for your kind words I really appreciate it. I hope you have a great and rockin day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiment here Lea, we need to have courage in life and we all make mistakes and have the opportunity to improve and learn from them. No one is perfect and we should not strive for perfection, just acceptance, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed the sentiment here Lea, we need to have courage in life and we all make mistakes and have the opportunity to improve and learn from them. No one is perfect and we should not strive for perfection, just acceptance, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much jelly i'm pleased that you like it especially a poet of your calibre. Thank you so much again have a great night!