From A Newer World
rhymed couplets, iambic pentameter - but it looks like prose2 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent! Very skilful and enjoyable advice to the world but in a humorous, memorable style and content. I've read it and re-read it and it gets more enjoyable each time. Many thanks, Debbie
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Excellent! Very skilful and enjoyable advice to the world but in a humorous, memorable style and content. I've read it and re-read it and it gets more enjoyable each time. Many thanks, Debbie
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Some lines are more that 10 syllables long and some are shorter, so it is difficult to recognise iambic pentameter. I would suggest you arrange your lines one under the other as it would make your poem easier to read. At the moment it is difficult to identify the rhyming within and this is a Rhyming Poetry Contest.
I can recognise talent in your writing here, it just needs some organising. I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Some lines are more that 10 syllables long and some are shorter, so it is difficult to recognise iambic pentameter. I would suggest you arrange your lines one under the other as it would make your poem easier to read. At the moment it is difficult to identify the rhyming within and this is a Rhyming Poetry Contest.
I can recognise talent in your writing here, it just needs some organising. I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
