Announcing Spring!
1-2-3-4- contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 1-2-3-4 poem contest. The text is a good size for reading. It could be one size larger with that big visual. I like it centered on the visual. The message is presented with clarity and is easily understood. You have over-used capitalization in this brief poem. Only "Spring " needs to begin with a capital letter. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry into the 1-2-3-4 poem contest. The text is a good size for reading. It could be one size larger with that big visual. I like it centered on the visual. The message is presented with clarity and is easily understood. You have over-used capitalization in this brief poem. Only "Spring " needs to begin with a capital letter. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Dear Sandra thank you for your comments and review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a warm and welcome post and you brought the ambient spring rain and fresh grass to my senses here and I enjoyed the journey, a fine post for the prompt, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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This is a warm and welcome post and you brought the ambient spring rain and fresh grass to my senses here and I enjoyed the journey, a fine post for the prompt, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from jessizero
It was actually pretty cold here this morning, but I like your weather better. You did a great job with the prompt. You captured a great image of a glorious spring morning. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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It was actually pretty cold here this morning, but I like your weather better. You did a great job with the prompt. You captured a great image of a glorious spring morning. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Dear jessizero, thank you for your comments and review.
