Homelessness
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Silence Calling"An account of total abandonhood.
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Comment from Ed Zeiser
Hi Ricky - What a wonderful poem! You really grasp some deep thoughts. I especially liked the first verse. I understand that there can be "Continuous darkness of gloom." I enjoy the darkness - especially when I go outside at night where I can marvel at the stars and the night sky. We live in the country where there is no ambient light so the sky can be beautiful.
I am sorry about the loss of your wife and son.
On a lighter note, the weather has been warm enough to go riding. I ride a Triumph 900 Street-Scrambler.
Ed
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Hi Ricky - What a wonderful poem! You really grasp some deep thoughts. I especially liked the first verse. I understand that there can be "Continuous darkness of gloom." I enjoy the darkness - especially when I go outside at night where I can marvel at the stars and the night sky. We live in the country where there is no ambient light so the sky can be beautiful.
I am sorry about the loss of your wife and son.
On a lighter note, the weather has been warm enough to go riding. I ride a Triumph 900 Street-Scrambler.
Ed
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thanks Ed.
900 Triumph I remember the 900 Nortons also.
I too used to drive 2000cc Kawasaki 2003 Baby Blue Vulcan cruiser.
(big bike)
But those days are over though and thanks for your review.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very interesting post you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive words from your heart that is so sad. Thank you for sharing. May God bless and comfort you my friend. Teri
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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This is a very well written and very interesting post you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive words from your heart that is so sad. Thank you for sharing. May God bless and comfort you my friend. Teri
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you Teri.
Yes, for stopping by.
And, your Always a pleasure!
Doctor Ricky
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You are so welcome my friend!!!
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You are so welcome!!!
Comment from papa55mike
We all have those times when silence is simple but deafening and won't be drowned out. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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We all have those times when silence is simple but deafening and won't be drowned out. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Mike it's actually a rush job which needed about 10 edits!
If you would like to reinspect it?
Yes, and thank you.
Ricky
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this post with us. I enjoyed reading.
So ripe these written thoughts from he. (Probably should be him, and if talking about God, Him)
Yes I can't change this fate and destiny. (comma after 'Yes')
What will be? What will be my reality. (Question mark after 'reality?')
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you for sharing this post with us. I enjoyed reading.
So ripe these written thoughts from he. (Probably should be him, and if talking about God, Him)
Yes I can't change this fate and destiny. (comma after 'Yes')
What will be? What will be my reality. (Question mark after 'reality?')
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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I thank you Barbara. This was a rough job.
It actually needed about 10 edits.
If you would like to reinspect you're welcome too and thank you!!
Doctor Ricky
