Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 120 "Surrendered"Romantic Tanka Poems
14 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Such gorgeous images and captivating words in your poem. The shores do sparkle with sunset tones when the tides rise and fall in the evening. Good luck with this poem.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Such gorgeous images and captivating words in your poem. The shores do sparkle with sunset tones when the tides rise and fall in the evening. Good luck with this poem.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Ulla
Hola Guapa! Como me ha gustado. This is a perfect, Tanka, Marival. You have written it so effortlessly. The pivot line is hardly there. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Hola Guapa! Como me ha gustado. This is a perfect, Tanka, Marival. You have written it so effortlessly. The pivot line is hardly there. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Gracias, guapa, Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is absolutely beautiful you have such a unique style. I love it. Beautiful overall presentation background and font colours. Breathtaking photos that compliment your words so well.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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This is absolutely beautiful you have such a unique style. I love it. Beautiful overall presentation background and font colours. Breathtaking photos that compliment your words so well.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your time and kind review.
Gypsy hugs
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Your so welcome 🙂
Comment from kahpot
What an excellent Tanka, I like the description of the sea and the moon
(thanks for the notes) as mutual attraction brings the heart into this wonderful read, beautifully written****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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What an excellent Tanka, I like the description of the sea and the moon
(thanks for the notes) as mutual attraction brings the heart into this wonderful read, beautifully written****kahpot
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for the definition of capricious with us. I have heard the word but not completely familiar with us. Thank you, also for sharing this beautiful package with us.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the definition of capricious with us. I have heard the word but not completely familiar with us. Thank you, also for sharing this beautiful package with us.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Capricious is just exactly the right word in this line. Your words combined to make a lovely picture, and I'm captivated by "tangled in turbulent love."
You know I like your tanka best!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Capricious is just exactly the right word in this line. Your words combined to make a lovely picture, and I'm captivated by "tangled in turbulent love."
You know I like your tanka best!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review. May you have a wonderful day.
Hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a great tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were fantastic they showed that the moon and the sea. Your words were perfect because the showed the waxing and waning of the situation. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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This was a great tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were fantastic they showed that the moon and the sea. Your words were perfect because the showed the waxing and waning of the situation. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review. May you have a wonderful day.
Hugs
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely poem. I wish you the very best in all your writing and all of your work is beautiful. I appreciate this very much. Have a wonderful day. Patricia.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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This is a lovely poem. I wish you the very best in all your writing and all of your work is beautiful. I appreciate this very much. Have a wonderful day. Patricia.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review. May you have a wonderful day.
Hugs
Comment from Mark Schardine
Perhaps you already know that you are headed for trouble, but once we give in to our passions, or maybe our caprice, we let events lead, even if they lead us to sorrow.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Perhaps you already know that you are headed for trouble, but once we give in to our passions, or maybe our caprice, we let events lead, even if they lead us to sorrow.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review. May you have a wonderful day.
Hugs
Comment from royowen
I like the way your words fit so beautifully with the imagery that is created in the reader's mind, this is another triumph for the master of the short form poetry, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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I like the way your words fit so beautifully with the imagery that is created in the reader's mind, this is another triumph for the master of the short form poetry, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review. May you have a wonderful day.
Hugs
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Most welcome