Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

How fun to see dolphins up close like that. It seems they like to play and show off for people. Interaction between wild creatures and humans can create an unforgettable encounter. Looks like you were lucky to have one of those encounters.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023

thanks as always

Comment from Lady MJ

Excellent

I have never seen dolphins up close or in person (just on television-nature shows). But, as I began reading this, I could picture being on a boat in the water off the coast as dolphins display their playfulness. When I can picture myself being a part of what I am reading, my attention has been captured. Great job!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023

thanks for the review appreciate it

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I saw pink dolphins in the Amazon and they seem to thrive all over the world and they are fascinating to watch, glad you have some fond memories of them in your poem here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023

thanks a lot

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Might want to review and edit here and there. For instance Dana Point, of which I am familiar is spell Dan the first time in the poem, and instead of repeating ONCE in consecutive lines, use ANOTHER.
I miss San Diego. I lived on Coronado for two years in the early seventies. San Diego had 600,00 for a population. Today, it is six million plus.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023

hmm will go back and fix this thanks