Oh, humanity!
Who is to blame? A poet's muse....2 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
This is a great poem very well-thought-out I don't know. I'm very relevant subject that needs to be talked about.
I have no issues with spelling or sentence structure. Just a you're fine man I'm not sure. How do you feel about this? But perhaps maybe separating your problem into stanza's 4 lines per stanza and maybe adding a picture increasing the font for a****** people who can't see. Very well l o l.
This however does not take away from the beauty of your Palm and I quite enjoyed it very much the message loud and clear. I hope you have a wonderful evening look forward to your next submission!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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This is a great poem very well-thought-out I don't know. I'm very relevant subject that needs to be talked about.
I have no issues with spelling or sentence structure. Just a you're fine man I'm not sure. How do you feel about this? But perhaps maybe separating your problem into stanza's 4 lines per stanza and maybe adding a picture increasing the font for a****** people who can't see. Very well l o l.
This however does not take away from the beauty of your Palm and I quite enjoyed it very much the message loud and clear. I hope you have a wonderful evening look forward to your next submission!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your feedback.
Comment from JanPerry
It seems we vote for a particular party in order to make them the scape goat for the emptiness and the terror of poverty we all experience from time to time.
You captured the scene well. "shelters and refuges aflow". I like the succinct way you have rounded it all up.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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It seems we vote for a particular party in order to make them the scape goat for the emptiness and the terror of poverty we all experience from time to time.
You captured the scene well. "shelters and refuges aflow". I like the succinct way you have rounded it all up.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your feedback.