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Wedding Canceled at Last Moment

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Comment from jessizero
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My love promised to marry me, but he left without a word. I guess I am lucky he didn't wait until the last minute. This poem was beautiful but painful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    Jessi,

    Sorry for that outcome, but you are better off without such a loser of a man. Thanks for yiur kind wishes for my post.
Comment from mermaids
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Excellent one line poem that speaks volumes. There is a feeling of sadness as the groom has changed his mind or panicked leaving the bride. Your words tell a story in one line.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    Mermaids,

    Pleased that my one line story-poem struck a chord with you. For the bride, the sound was hollow.