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Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is an interesting entry for the one line contest. I can only guess at the dusty feet - is that something to do with the footprint we leave behind fading into oblivion over time thus making things so different from change and evolution? That is my story and I am sticking to it.
Best of luck :-)
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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This is an interesting entry for the one line contest. I can only guess at the dusty feet - is that something to do with the footprint we leave behind fading into oblivion over time thus making things so different from change and evolution? That is my story and I am sticking to it.
Best of luck :-)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your valuation and kind words and for your insight you're pretty smart! Thank you for your kind review and for your time and for her lovely comments. I take them all too hard and it's all individually thank you again!!
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Your are welcome. I enjoyed where your one line took me :-).
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the One Line Poem writing prompt contest. It has a mystical feeling...like the lord of the ring.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Excellent entry for the One Line Poem writing prompt contest. It has a mystical feeling...like the lord of the ring.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thank you gypsy. I'm really glad you liked it and I'm happy that year looking over my writing and off for your comments and kind of opinion I thank you again. Have an awesome evening!
Comment from kahpot
We are always unsure of where we should or should not walk, which path do we follow, so many questions, do we think, maybe we are the missing link, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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We are always unsure of where we should or should not walk, which path do we follow, so many questions, do we think, maybe we are the missing link, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Ah thank you so much i'm glad you like it! I take and this might sound a little bit wacky But my take on the theory of the missing link is that scientist will never find it and they won't find it because we are not native to this planet. We are slowly and systematically reckoned our planet soon. She will shake us off like fleas on a dog's back. You I appreciate it hopefully. I didn't tip your weirdo meter. L? OL anyway hope you have a great. Night? Thank you again for your time and for your review!
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the wordplay you have going on in this piece. It runs right off the tongue and is easy to read. I love the way it carries me through like I am gliding down a stream.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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I like the wordplay you have going on in this piece. It runs right off the tongue and is easy to read. I love the way it carries me through like I am gliding down a stream.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much Mia! i'm glad you liked it!
For your review and for your kind comments I really appreciate it. I hope you have a great day!
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Wow how mysterious! I want to read more! This really is an excellent eye opener as it begs one to know more about what the mystery is behind the missing link. I love the illustration. Awesome!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Wow how mysterious! I want to read more! This really is an excellent eye opener as it begs one to know more about what the mystery is behind the missing link. I love the illustration. Awesome!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much I'm so glad you're like it. Other human eyed species like the cromagnon and the neanderthal find out where the cross species is between us and them and I'm saying there. Isn'thank you again for your review and for the sign you took to? Do so I hope you have a good day.!
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-line poem, Missing Link, uses eleven words and seems to describe where we are and going to. Here is the starting point, the everything, and there is the future.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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This one-line poem, Missing Link, uses eleven words and seems to describe where we are and going to. Here is the starting point, the everything, and there is the future.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you I'm glad you liked it. It's yeah challenge you're the one who understands you though. I really appreciate your comments and I hope you having a great day!
Comment from JT traveller
Intriguing, mysterious, thought provoking. A rhyming one line poem, not an easy task. Well done. Add to that a beautiful illustration which only serves to deepen the intrigue. You are on to a winner!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Intriguing, mysterious, thought provoking. A rhyming one line poem, not an easy task. Well done. Add to that a beautiful illustration which only serves to deepen the intrigue. You are on to a winner!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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That's so kind of you to say thank you very much and glad you liked ithat's great. Thanks again hope you have a good evening!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good one line poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-An interesting take on the "missing link"
and the reason why it is becoming obsolete.
-A good entry; good luck.
-I use a PC, and the word 'feet' goes onto the next line.
-You might want to reduce the font a little bit.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good one line poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-An interesting take on the "missing link"
and the reason why it is becoming obsolete.
-A good entry; good luck.
-I use a PC, and the word 'feet' goes onto the next line.
-You might want to reduce the font a little bit.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much and for your suggestions in your kind comments and thank you very much for for your time as well. I hope you're having a great evening!
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You are welcome. The evening is going pretty well; hope yours is, too.
Comment from mermaids
I admire your use of rhyming words, the internal rhyme adds smoothness to your poem. You did well in creating a one line poem which is quite a challenge to write.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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I admire your use of rhyming words, the internal rhyme adds smoothness to your poem. You did well in creating a one line poem which is quite a challenge to write.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind words thank you for your review. I really appreciate it and I hope you have a great day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When embarking on new roads it is difficult to piece things together when everything is new and different, but we soon learn the ropes, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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When embarking on new roads it is difficult to piece things together when everything is new and different, but we soon learn the ropes, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you dolly you always have something Is interesting to say for my mind to chilling. Thanks again for your time and you review as always you're the best have a great day!