DQed
Repulsion and renunciation4 total reviews
Comment from Kaiku
yep, that is a story for sure. It would be better told with a font that wasn`t so small. You have a huge ball of fire with words that can be barely read or visible for that matter.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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yep, that is a story for sure. It would be better told with a font that wasn`t so small. You have a huge ball of fire with words that can be barely read or visible for that matter.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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In order not to be DQed (again), I made the font as large as possible and still be on one line.
Did I cheat??????
(smiley face here)
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can`t imagine being DQ`d because of font size. That`s an error on the committee.
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Yet I see several in the contest whose entries bled to a second line!
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I believe the committee looks at the punctuation. A one line story can be more than 6 words (as an example) One complete statement
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As I said, I've been DQed for less.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
This is a very good poem unfortunately difficult to read because the font is so small. I find if you raise the font the picture will shrink and you can read it better. It is a nice beautiful palm and you and a long line indeed but that's okay nothing wrong with that. It's quite like what you've put there and the picture is symbolism it's really neat.
So I find no nothing wrong with your phone per se other than just a block the font somewhere and shrink your picture there are older people who won't. Be able to read it so thank you so much for your submission all the best!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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This is a very good poem unfortunately difficult to read because the font is so small. I find if you raise the font the picture will shrink and you can read it better. It is a nice beautiful palm and you and a long line indeed but that's okay nothing wrong with that. It's quite like what you've put there and the picture is symbolism it's really neat.
So I find no nothing wrong with your phone per se other than just a block the font somewhere and shrink your picture there are older people who won't. Be able to read it so thank you so much for your submission all the best!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your kindness.
In my effort not to be disqualified, I had to shrink the font in order to get it in a single line. (smiley face here)
I have been DQed for less. (smiley face here)
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Ah I see it understood while I wish you the best!
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was deep and philosophical. Great creative imagery and visuals. I like the subtle humor and a punch to it.
Best of luck in the competition, I think it should go very well. You definitely fit volumes in this one line.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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This was deep and philosophical. Great creative imagery and visuals. I like the subtle humor and a punch to it.
Best of luck in the competition, I think it should go very well. You definitely fit volumes in this one line.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you for for very kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A complex situation described here of fury and acceptance, a poignant write for the contest, I wish you luck with this one liner, that is a scary picture, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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A complex situation described here of fury and acceptance, a poignant write for the contest, I wish you luck with this one liner, that is a scary picture, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you.
I expect to be DQed for some imaginary reason.
Even if not, without a pet or grandchild it has slim prospects.
