Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I was wondering if any of the Church's teaching were going to enter any of your posts. I see some here. Thank you for sharing. The Church's believes are a complete lifestyle.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

Church for child a monthly magazine called the "Ensign"
The church recognizes me as they're writing Poet and Priest.
According to a man who contacted me years ago about 5, he was following my work on one of my writing sites.
Poetry and Writing.com
At one point it was getting 60,000 hits a day before I could start on my own poetry site. It crashed and my money was stolen.
But that man was reading my work and he said he was responsible for millions of Christians and then I need to get it published.
I've contacted Faith publishing but I'm too late. Busy with all my other work to get involved right now.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Feelings immersed and dispersed, asTestimony begins. - needs a space after 'as'
Feelings that shell forever last. - (shall?)
New Cleansing with Empathy and compassion - For consistency, 'compassion' needs capitalized.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

Thanks for your wonderful review and your grammar issue. Wayne.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Not sure sustational is a real word Ricky, do you mean sustainable? Being cleansed with empathy and compassion sounds like a pleasant feeling, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

You have to realize but now it's Dolly did I do make my own words up see sometimes I don't explain them but it basically does mean to sustain but in a deeper way.
Thanks again,
Ricky