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"The Book of Death"

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Is the living really alive and living?

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us. It's dark and we all go there at times.

Always floating but never completely saved. (The only requirement is faith is Jesus Christ as your savior.)

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    Thanks Barbara your notion is my Ocean.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment from country ranch writer
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Wasted days and wasted nights.
Feelings of guilt of losing you only so.
Donating hid organs so others could live.
The loss of your wife due to taking her own life.
Not able ti Fiordland with it all was a cry for help.
When yo tried to kill your self under the stress and depression weighing on you heart. Going off the deep end until you hit Rick bottom and ke Jesus back into your seeking help.
God told you to get a grip on your life for you mission was not finished you had to quit being selfish wallowing un your own grief and reach out and help others live and pass life on to others by spreading the word to others to donate their organs by signing the donors card to pass life to sating others and seeking help got their depression befor it was out of control.Help others help themselves!call 988!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    There will be many more days in the next two weeks and much deeper.
    I have issues now with organ tissue donation. The house I used to live in they stole all my stuff.
    Even a picture of my son on the gift of life card.
    The green bands I hand out that says, "Done Vida"
    And, in Italian mean,
    "Donate Life"
    More on all this later. I'm looking for 24 months in jail for the two of them. If my stuff doesn't return after my attorney calls and asks for them to follow the request in the in the original letter.
    Doctor Ricky
reply by country ranch writer on 20-Mar-2023
    Smiles hang in there
reply by country ranch writer on 20-Mar-2023
    Smiles hang in there
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your choice words here are powerful and leave us knowing just how devastating it is to lose someone close and how we are robbed of their company for life, these are heartfelt words here Ricky, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    Well to tell you the truth after 19 years is a widower.
    I'm kind of used to sleeping with myself.
    And, I wouldn't know what to do with a woman???
    Tee, Hee, He!!!
    Ricky