Comment from karenina

Excellent

Interesting! A double refrain! (Well, one and a half refrains per stanza!). ("way up high" "The lovely rainbows in the sky").

Clever twist which makes this offering stand out!

Great rhymes, eight syllable per line...A real contender!!!

Good luck!

Karenina

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023

Thanks!

reply by karenina on 20-Mar-2023

Welcome!

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

This is a very beautiful spring Kyrielle you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023

Thanks!

reply by Teri7 on 20-Mar-2023

💕💕😊

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet , you have 2 votes now.

You poem mirrors everything I cherish from the birds merry song to the rain , lightening and the rainbow up high.

A very pleasant poem that warms the heart!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

Thanks a lot!

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Appropriate poem for the entrance of a new season
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

Thanks so much.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a sweet natured write with a wonderful flow and well chosen rhymes and the subject is uplifting and nurturing, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

Thanks a lot, much appreciated.