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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

A beautiful, captivating overall presentation which inspires me at all levels.
The words are insightful and the image captivating and together a wondrous creation.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your haiku poem- excellent picture presentation- supporting the poem well- resilient flower- stoops- good word-bent but not broken- nice- good job AP

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
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An excellent haiku, love the connection between "resilient" and "bent but not broken" beautifully written and presented, best wishe s for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Like "bent but not broken." When I was reading this poem, I thought about when a person gets osteo as they get older and tired. They are bent but not broken like the flower's stem after a hard rain.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark Schardine
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We think of the need for resilience, and how seemingly fragile plants resist rain and storms. We admire the small heroes of our world, the ones who overcome adversity.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much, Mark.

    Gypsy
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This may be my favorite, yet. Beautifully written, as always. The symbolism and message conveyed is one to be heard, and it was perfectly delivered. I love this so much, excellent job. Thank you for sharing!
<3
Jessica

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    Hello, Jessica, thank you for the exceptional six stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day (or night).

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Beautifully written and stated .
A poem of hope for human resilience. Seeing a flower or plant suddenly raise up when the sun comes out is comforting.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    Hello,

    thank you for the exceptional five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day (or night).

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I have a feeling this poem is a metaphor for life. Much like the torrential rain bend the flower some of life's experiences bend us, but doesn't break us. We can come back stronger. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I have a feeling it's a life experience.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    Hello, Barbara,

    thank you for the exceptional five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day (or night).

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice images and presentation, Gypsy.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You have written a good haiku with
effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-Good description of the flower and the rain.
-A good satori line, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
-I enjoyed reading your interview, too!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    Hello, Pam,

    thank you for the exceptional five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day (or night).

    Gypsy hugs
reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Mar-2023
    You are very welcome, Gypsy. It is early evening here in NJ. You have a good rest of your day and upcoming week.
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
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Lovely poem depicting the resilience of a flower. Much like us we have the ability to bend and not break. We are resilient as well. I love the deep colors you have used. Beautiful!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    Hello, Kerry,

    thank you for the exceptional five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day (or night).

    Gypsy hugs