Little Donkey
Jesus enters Jerusalem6 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
This is a great poem full of messages for the hope full of urgency full of important information everyone needs to know.
Having said that I'm afraid this is the last schematic for man on which planet. Yes god will save everyone of us that they last home. It's a personal belief not anything that anyone needs to put shock in. But your poem resonated degree within me so I thought I would share it out with you.
Aesthetically speaking your home is great I find no issues with Punctuation grammar spelling sentence structure all looks fine. Just one suggestion for the older people if you could turn up the font a bit on your text. It would help them read better thank you for your submission have a great day!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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This is a great poem full of messages for the hope full of urgency full of important information everyone needs to know.
Having said that I'm afraid this is the last schematic for man on which planet. Yes god will save everyone of us that they last home. It's a personal belief not anything that anyone needs to put shock in. But your poem resonated degree within me so I thought I would share it out with you.
Aesthetically speaking your home is great I find no issues with Punctuation grammar spelling sentence structure all looks fine. Just one suggestion for the older people if you could turn up the font a bit on your text. It would help them read better thank you for your submission have a great day!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thanks Lea. I will turn the font up; I'm struggling with cataracts and turning 78!
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Oh I'm sorry.....my eyes growing dim too
Comment from Gina Schneller
This is such a wonderful poem! Organized and well written with such feeling and respect. I really enjoyed it and will share with the family! Have a beautiful Easter! God Bless.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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This is such a wonderful poem! Organized and well written with such feeling and respect. I really enjoyed it and will share with the family! Have a beautiful Easter! God Bless.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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God bless you Gina. Thank you for reading and so glad you enjoyed. May His light shine upon you and grant you peace. Love, Kay xx
Comment from mermaids
I love your title "Little Donkey". That little donkey had a huge job to do. Your poem captures Palm Sunday perfectly and I like how you mention the evil in this world that will be defeated by Jesus. I needed a good faith poem today and you provided one.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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I love your title "Little Donkey". That little donkey had a huge job to do. Your poem captures Palm Sunday perfectly and I like how you mention the evil in this world that will be defeated by Jesus. I needed a good faith poem today and you provided one.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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The song kept going around in my head, carry Mary safely home. So I thought about Jesus on a donkey riding into Jerusalem. Thanks Elaine, love, Kay.
Comment from Wendy G
You are good at the Loop poems! I like this one as well, a thoughtful one before Palm Sunday. Plenty to meditate on within it as the true Messiah proves to be a disppointment to those who want an earthly deliverer - but will never disappoint those who trust in Him. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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You are good at the Loop poems! I like this one as well, a thoughtful one before Palm Sunday. Plenty to meditate on within it as the true Messiah proves to be a disppointment to those who want an earthly deliverer - but will never disappoint those who trust in Him. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Yep, it doesn't rhyme but when I start to write a poem it just comes naturally Looping. Thanks Wendy. Love, Kay xx
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for this lovely Palm Sunday poem. I like how you bring us right into the scene with the donkey, a small one, walking on the palm fronds. Little did anyone know about how that week would end with the crucifixion of the Lord Who paid for the sins of humankind so that death would be conquered once and for all.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this lovely Palm Sunday poem. I like how you bring us right into the scene with the donkey, a small one, walking on the palm fronds. Little did anyone know about how that week would end with the crucifixion of the Lord Who paid for the sins of humankind so that death would be conquered once and for all.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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I don't want the world to forget Him. Using my writing, it goes across cyberspace for all to remember. Thanks friend. K xx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This religious festival is a big event in this country and I enjoyed your fine loop presentation to celebrate this event in the religious calendar, this seems to be your favourite form just now, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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This religious festival is a big event in this country and I enjoyed your fine loop presentation to celebrate this event in the religious calendar, this seems to be your favourite form just now, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Hi Dolly, I am addicted to Loop poetry, can't write normally now! I use FS to get the message out there, so people won't forget Jesus. Thank you possum. K xx
