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Kyrielle Entry6 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Nice job! Not everyone kept consistent eight syllable lines... At least one missed the repeating refrain. You've fulfilled all the requirements of the Kyrielle.
Best of luck in this contest!
(And please tell me where I can find that "aura of silence" as my pet peeve is the "talkers" during the movie!)
:)
Karenina
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Nice job! Not everyone kept consistent eight syllable lines... At least one missed the repeating refrain. You've fulfilled all the requirements of the Kyrielle.
Best of luck in this contest!
(And please tell me where I can find that "aura of silence" as my pet peeve is the "talkers" during the movie!)
:)
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
The joys of movies! Imagine how much more so back in the 40s, when for the price of a nickel you got a cartoon, a serial, a news reel, and two movies. And a few cents more got you a popcorn and drink. Of course the movies were original back then, too. But at least the seats today are comfortable.
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The joys of movies! Imagine how much more so back in the 40s, when for the price of a nickel you got a cartoon, a serial, a news reel, and two movies. And a few cents more got you a popcorn and drink. Of course the movies were original back then, too. But at least the seats today are comfortable.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
Comment from patcelaw
You wrote a beautiful poem for this contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. It rhymes well and it's presented beautifully. I am not much of a movie buff, so I very seldom go out to the movies. Patricia
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You wrote a beautiful poem for this contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. It rhymes well and it's presented beautifully. I am not much of a movie buff, so I very seldom go out to the movies. Patricia
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This is well written, with the right syllable count and good rhyming. It's a good entry for the contest, but has one stanza too many for this particular contest. You may want to correct that. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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This is well written, with the right syllable count and good rhyming. It's a good entry for the contest, but has one stanza too many for this particular contest. You may want to correct that. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thanks for your review and for spotting my mistake. Now corrected.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You described the excitement here perfectly when I go to the local cinema and I have not been in a while, but guess what? They are building a new cinema walking distance from my home and I can't wait for the doors to open, this is a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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You described the excitement here perfectly when I go to the local cinema and I have not been in a while, but guess what? They are building a new cinema walking distance from my home and I can't wait for the doors to open, this is a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thanks for your review. It sounds like that new cinema is something to look forward to.
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It is, thank you x x x
Comment from RodG
I remember those Saturday nights spent at the cinema with friends. You describe the anticipation and expectations very well. I can almost smell the popcorn and see the lights dim as the curtain rises. Rod
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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I remember those Saturday nights spent at the cinema with friends. You describe the anticipation and expectations very well. I can almost smell the popcorn and see the lights dim as the curtain rises. Rod
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thanks for your review, Rod. This was meant to be a glimpse into the old age of going to the cinema. Sadly, I think that same feeling is lost nowadays.