Comment from Kerry L Batchelder

Excellent

This sounds like the stirring of new, fresh love. Beautiful and moving. I like the illustration and font style which brings even greater beauty to the poem. A work of art to be sure!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

Thank you so much, I appreciate your review!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Passion writing prompt contest.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Goodluck

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023

Thanks so much! :)

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Like "sings of my passion." Anything that is musical is a work of art. The cello is a well-played instrument. It does have rhythm that sends a sound throughout the room.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023

Thank you very much for your feedback!
:)

Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova

Excellent

A serenade is one of the most beautiful expressions of love. You have successfully conveyed its power and passion in three elegantly simple lines. And excellent poem.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023

Thank you so much, I'm delighted you feel that way.
:)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is just lovely, mystery poet. Your 5-7-5 poem flows like a thought and the art crowns your fine work. All my best for the day, and my best in the contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023

Thank you so much, Sally!!
<3

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love the ambiguity you've managed to sow into this excellent short form poem. The thought of music being both external in internal, strums a chord within one, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

Thank you, Roy!
:)

reply by royowen on 19-Mar-2023

Bless you

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery with a musical theme,
like "heart beating tempo."
-You also have a good concluding line.
-Consider an em dash after 'within'
and it would reinforce that last line.
-Good luck in he contest; a good entry.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023

Thank you, Pam for your review and excellent suggestion! I edited accordingly.
:)

reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Mar-2023

You are welcome. I'm glad you liked the suggestion.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

String instruments have that great ability to touch our heart with melodies of sadness or uptempo beats that make us dance. Music in general can be uplifting and improve the quality of our lives, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023

Thanks, Dolly, much appreciated!