How About You
A 3-Line Poem19 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good presentation, kahpot.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You did a good job describing reading between the lines.
-Sometimes it is easy to do and other times, not so much.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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-A good presentation, kahpot.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You did a good job describing reading between the lines.
-Sometimes it is easy to do and other times, not so much.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are welcome.
Comment from June Sargent
Quite often it comes up blank these days! But don't sweat it. Sooner or later, a thought will pop up and I chalk it off to a flight delay due to heavy traffic... a lot going on in our minds.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Quite often it comes up blank these days! But don't sweat it. Sooner or later, a thought will pop up and I chalk it off to a flight delay due to heavy traffic... a lot going on in our minds.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Senryu poem- interesting statement- my impression-reading between the lines- you have been told to read between the lines told by someone in a positive way to use your cognitive ability to better understand- you obeyed? Obeyed is a strong word - kind of like forced - against your will -perhaps another word would be 'acquiesced'. - I like the play on words - 'between the lines' IS blank - not black and white- requiring cognitive ability- interesting poem Good job AP
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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I like your Senryu poem- interesting statement- my impression-reading between the lines- you have been told to read between the lines told by someone in a positive way to use your cognitive ability to better understand- you obeyed? Obeyed is a strong word - kind of like forced - against your will -perhaps another word would be 'acquiesced'. - I like the play on words - 'between the lines' IS blank - not black and white- requiring cognitive ability- interesting poem Good job AP
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you AP. and you may be right about "Obeyed" I'll have a look, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Cleverly done. Please send instruction how I can join your reading between lines. A dense personality sometimes won't allow for it. As for this piece it should reverberate with a victory dance.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Cleverly done. Please send instruction how I can join your reading between lines. A dense personality sometimes won't allow for it. As for this piece it should reverberate with a victory dance.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you Tom, sorry no instructions, ------ and dense personality I don't believe, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from country ranch writer
Sometimes when someone writes about something you can figure out what is behind the writing. As they say reading between the lines you can feel the emotions and caring in one's writing.3-18-2023.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Sometimes when someone writes about something you can figure out what is behind the writing. As they say reading between the lines you can feel the emotions and caring in one's writing.3-18-2023.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, I think words give a bit of us all, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Ha ha this one's very cleaver great job! This gives me a good chuckle actually it really got we need that every once in a whil even if we don't know what we're talking about L. O l.
Seriously though this is very well done. I quite like it and I don't see any aesthetically speak. Ing a lot with you grammar or anything like that and I think it's all quite good!
I thank you for your submission and I hope to see more!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Ha ha this one's very cleaver great job! This gives me a good chuckle actually it really got we need that every once in a whil even if we don't know what we're talking about L. O l.
Seriously though this is very well done. I quite like it and I don't see any aesthetically speak. Ing a lot with you grammar or anything like that and I think it's all quite good!
I thank you for your submission and I hope to see more!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you so very much, I was going for humor, and I am glad you smiled, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Reading between the lines is an art and sometimes we misread someone's intentions, a magical write as you have revealed nothing between the lines here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Reading between the lines is an art and sometimes we misread someone's intentions, a magical write as you have revealed nothing between the lines here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from BermyBye50
kahpot,
This is an excellent entry for the 3 Line Poetry contest. Each line is well-written and powerful. It speaks to a universal dilemma of talented writers and poets everywhere. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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kahpot,
This is an excellent entry for the 3 Line Poetry contest. Each line is well-written and powerful. It speaks to a universal dilemma of talented writers and poets everywhere. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from JT traveller
Oh I love this humurous twist on the three line poem theme. Your words made me giggle. Thank you for the afternoon fun.
A winner in my eyes. Best of luck. Jacqueline
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Oh I love this humurous twist on the three line poem theme. Your words made me giggle. Thank you for the afternoon fun.
A winner in my eyes. Best of luck. Jacqueline
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, I am glad you caught the humor in these words, very much appreciated****kahpot
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😂👌
