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make passion happen

make passion happen in real life

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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My Granddaughter sent me a birthday card with these words on it one year and she chose the card herself, she wanted me to hang onto my dreams, a fine sentiment, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    thanks appreciate it
Comment from Julie Lau
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Well done in producing a coherent poem which conforms to all requirements. However, I would like to see some punctuation. Best of good fortune in the contest.
Julie Lau

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    thanks did it without punctuation haiku style to me