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Romantic Tanka Poems

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Comment from Mark Schardine
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Nothing gives us as much joy as seeing the beauty of the natural world while waiting for a loved one. Each moment of waiting gives joy, and soon enough the loved appears.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. The picture was wonderful and of a brook babbling away. The tanka was great because it spoke the truth. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem in a kind and helpful way. Blessed be!

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I loved the idea of the rocks and branches being covered by contagious laughter. Thats such a happy thought. Once again, you've created the perfect package. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem in a kind and helpful way.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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This is a lovely limerick. The last line brings the perfect ending to your bubbling brook. The picture illustrates it beautifully, or is that vice versa. I enjoy your tankas.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    It's a tanka poem :)

    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem in a kind and helpful way.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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I very much enjoyed the alliteration in this Tanka poem, and even found myself looking for more. But maybe that is just my personal preference and would have been excessive. kay

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem in a kind and helpful way.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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Another stunning presentation and perfectly executed modern Tanka.
The whole presentation bubbles with life and beauty and to have captured it's essence is truly magical
****** virtual six
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem in a kind and helpful way.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your tanka poem- Excellent picture presentation- very beautiful- poem flows well - tells a nice story- good use of metaphors describing the creeks characteristics and journey- ending on a happy note - good job

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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I love the "contagious laughter" of the babbling brook ! That makes us appreciate more than the natural setting of the water which brings up memories that make us happy. Great use of alliteration and personification!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
    Thank you, big sister, I'm so happy you like it.

    Love,

    Marival ❤️