Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Ooooh la la! Where can I get me one of those Troy boys?
He looks like a younger version of John Travolta.
I like this 1-6-1. It is cheeky and fun.
Best of luck with him and the competition ;-)

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023

Thanks a lot DD. Just a bit of fun for the 1-6-1 but didn?t go down too well but hey ho. Take care. Jen.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt contest .

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Goodluck

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023

Many thanks Gypsy.

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 Contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood.
Your text is imbalanced in the poem box. Drop the first line down one or two spaces so it will have the same spacing as at the bottom of your poem. The poem will present better. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

Thank you Sandra.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 19-Mar-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Well, the Speaker does not mince words in describing how Troy fits into her life. One senses (from the title) that she might be significantly older than him. Rod

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023

Yes that?s the idea. Thanks for reviewing Rod.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Not bad at all and having a toy boy sounds great but it may not last a life time. He he he, this is a fun poem for the contest, I loved the humour, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023

Thanks Dolly. X

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

Not bad, indeed. And your poem is not bad either. It reads well, meeting the 1-6-1 challenge in a fun way. Good luck in the contest. Say hi to Troy for me.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023

Thanks Glinda for reviewing. Glad you like my bit of eye candy lol.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Your poem can only be read by highlighting it.
You should change the font color to a darker one.
Good addition of the nice three rhymes, and the syllables are exact.
Troy was a great city, movie and now a good looking guy.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023

Thank you. I let it go too early by mistake. I have edited it.