Comment from
Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 Contest. The text is too small under the large visual. The visual dwarfs the text. Enlarging the text will make your text more prominent. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
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reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 19-Mar-2023
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
I heard the sound of the door bell ringing here and your few simple words fulfil the rules of the contest and I wish you luck with it, a tuneful write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
Comment from
jessizero
You did a great job with this prompt. You had the correct number of syllables, and your rhymes were great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023