Comment from
Nicki Nance
You tell an important story with this Tyburn. Death knell is such a compelling word. Your choices were powerful. Good luck with the contest. This looks like a strong contender
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
thanks a lot it was fun to write
Comment from
JT traveller
A very deep, intense Tyburn poem.
A typo in the title, "meth klls". Easily remedied.
It is an awful drug with harrowing effects, involving both the user and those close to them. I can relate as I have known people addicted.
I do like the darkness in your edgy poem. It should be put up on billboards around the world.
Jacqueline
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
thanks I will fix the typo