Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "What a day!"Musing of an old man
21 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The literary technique of metaphor carries this poem. I like how you turn a cautionary tale into a happy series of solutions. The reader will identify, you've use such relatable examples.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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The literary technique of metaphor carries this poem. I like how you turn a cautionary tale into a happy series of solutions. The reader will identify, you've use such relatable examples.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Liz, isn?t it just fun to let your pen and thoughts loose once and awhile? 😉
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It sure is.
Comment from royowen
This is such a fantastic piece of artwork to write a poem for, I giggle everytime I see it, it really evokes some great images, particularly the yellow, which is the keynote image, well done Jim, another great post added to your arsenal of fine poems, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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This is such a fantastic piece of artwork to write a poem for, I giggle everytime I see it, it really evokes some great images, particularly the yellow, which is the keynote image, well done Jim, another great post added to your arsenal of fine poems, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you kind sir!
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A pleasure
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Very cute and totally relatable as we have all had those bad "days." I love the background also which is perfectly fitting!! Super cute combination. You did an excellent job.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Very cute and totally relatable as we have all had those bad "days." I love the background also which is perfectly fitting!! Super cute combination. You did an excellent job.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from w.j.debi
This is a fun response to the club prompt. Life has so many things to hassle us and make us pull funny faces. Why not smile? Not only does it take less muscles, it makes us feel better down deep.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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This is a fun response to the club prompt. Life has so many things to hassle us and make us pull funny faces. Why not smile? Not only does it take less muscles, it makes us feel better down deep.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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w.j.debi, yes what not smile!
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
I absolutely love your choice of the silly eggs in the carton. I had to laugh as they are such s perfect fit as your poem. No truer words as we all have those days. Very well written.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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I absolutely love your choice of the silly eggs in the carton. I had to laugh as they are such s perfect fit as your poem. No truer words as we all have those days. Very well written.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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I delight that you found some laughter within these words. Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your compliment to this picture here John as we have many moans and groans about our day when things continually go wrong, I liked your approach here, a fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed your compliment to this picture here John as we have many moans and groans about our day when things continually go wrong, I liked your approach here, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you Dolly, Jim
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Sorry Jim as I keep calling you John, I hope you will forgive me x x x
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Nothing to forgive you for Dolly, maybe I was a John is a previous life 😏
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is an amusing and well rhymed poem from this carton of egg faces. I enjoyed how you went through the day but managed to finish it off with a smile. Nicely interpreted JLR.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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This is an amusing and well rhymed poem from this carton of egg faces. I enjoyed how you went through the day but managed to finish it off with a smile. Nicely interpreted JLR.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Hi valda, thank you very much, have a splendid weekend.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jim,
This is a witty take on the artwork. It is so true that one person can use a lot of expressions in one day. Also, that positive thinking is the way to go.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy St Patrick's Day.
Joan
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Hi Jim,
This is a witty take on the artwork. It is so true that one person can use a lot of expressions in one day. Also, that positive thinking is the way to go.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy St Patrick's Day.
Joan
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Joan, thanks so much, have a splendid weekend.
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Don't mention it, Jim.
Same to you.
Joan
Comment from Janet Foor
A fun and cunning poem for the picture club. We've all had days like this and you can get upset or smile and get on with your day.
Well done.
Blessings and smiles
Janet
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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A fun and cunning poem for the picture club. We've all had days like this and you can get upset or smile and get on with your day.
Well done.
Blessings and smiles
Janet
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thanks for your review and validation, I especially appreciate your blessings as I go into surgery Monday,
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Good luck with your surgery Monday. I will add you to my prayers for a good result and a speedy recovery.
Blessings
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Like this poem about cute pictures of funny egg faces, I think they are laughing at us because the bird flu killed many chickens, and the price of eggs has sky-rocket.
Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Like this poem about cute pictures of funny egg faces, I think they are laughing at us because the bird flu killed many chickens, and the price of eggs has sky-rocket.
Well done.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Jasmine, yes I imagine all those hens are clucking away.