Novella - Unwanted Dog
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Brett,
Obviously Dusty stepped up to the plate, doing what a father does and setting a good example for you. I'm glad that he escaped any serious injury working with those chemicals. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Hello Brett,
Obviously Dusty stepped up to the plate, doing what a father does and setting a good example for you. I'm glad that he escaped any serious injury working with those chemicals. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your insightful comments and the review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Working with chemicals is dangerous and we don't really know the extent of the damage until many years have past and health deteriorates, a sensitive write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Working with chemicals is dangerous and we don't really know the extent of the damage until many years have past and health deteriorates, a sensitive write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
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Comment from prettybluebirds
My favorite brother was in the VietNam war. He didn't get killed or injured in the war, but he got cancer from agent orange that was dumped all over VietNam. Your story is skillfully executed and an interesting read.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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My favorite brother was in the VietNam war. He didn't get killed or injured in the war, but he got cancer from agent orange that was dumped all over VietNam. Your story is skillfully executed and an interesting read.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
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Comment from lyenochka
I liked the concern of the narrator for Dusty. It shows real love just as Dusty's willingness to sacrifice his time off to provide shows love and endurance, that's rare today.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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I liked the concern of the narrator for Dusty. It shows real love just as Dusty's willingness to sacrifice his time off to provide shows love and endurance, that's rare today.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
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Comment from Wendy G
I too felt relief when his job with the chemicals came to an end - there are so many stories of premature death when working with such materials. You vividly portayed the anxiety a young boy would feel: Dusty was his rescuer - what would happen if anything happened to Dusty? Dusty was an admirable character, doing whatever it took to look after you, the special one who had become his family. That is true love. You've described him very well.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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I too felt relief when his job with the chemicals came to an end - there are so many stories of premature death when working with such materials. You vividly portayed the anxiety a young boy would feel: Dusty was his rescuer - what would happen if anything happened to Dusty? Dusty was an admirable character, doing whatever it took to look after you, the special one who had become his family. That is true love. You've described him very well.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
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Comment from Rebecca Roberts1
Very nicely written. I love the way you integrate history with your autobiography.
The dialogue was excellent, with lots of imagery.
I like the lesson with your story as well.
This is a wonderful work.
(Something you might want to fix; "something go tragically")
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Very nicely written. I love the way you integrate history with your autobiography.
The dialogue was excellent, with lots of imagery.
I like the lesson with your story as well.
This is a wonderful work.
(Something you might want to fix; "something go tragically")
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
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Comment from royowen
Wow! The sacrifices that Dusty made speak so well of him, a godly man, which is how I would expect a good father to act, no wonder he managed to see the potential in you, God never chooses us because we're good, but sees the potential in us. Well done Brett, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Wow! The sacrifices that Dusty made speak so well of him, a godly man, which is how I would expect a good father to act, no wonder he managed to see the potential in you, God never chooses us because we're good, but sees the potential in us. Well done Brett, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
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Well done
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Even though a lot of things were new to you and you had to learn the farming procedures, you had a better home than what you had experienced at the Heritage House. Thank God for Dusty!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Even though a lot of things were new to you and you had to learn the farming procedures, you had a better home than what you had experienced at the Heritage House. Thank God for Dusty!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
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Comment from Sankey
A great read and of course you were worried about the man who saved you and you came to love, as a real dad I guess. This is still a great read. Keep it going. I hope others are enjoying it as I am. No spags.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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A great read and of course you were worried about the man who saved you and you came to love, as a real dad I guess. This is still a great read. Keep it going. I hope others are enjoying it as I am. No spags.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
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Always appreciate your comments and reviews. Still deciding whether to stay or leave. Unsure what I want to do.
Comment from Shirley McLain
That mill job Dusty worked out sounds horrible. I'm sure living with it was much worse. You did a fine job with this chapter, as usual. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a great afternoon. Shirley
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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That mill job Dusty worked out sounds horrible. I'm sure living with it was much worse. You did a fine job with this chapter, as usual. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a great afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
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