The Beach at Normandy
June 6, 194422 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
This is a difficult incident to tell so briefly. However, you give a vivid account of the main action and the heavy death toll. The German defence was greater and more sustained than expected.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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This is a difficult incident to tell so briefly. However, you give a vivid account of the main action and the heavy death toll. The German defence was greater and more sustained than expected.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Sarah. This was a hard fought battle.
I appreciate your feedback.
John
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Best wishes!
Comment from mermaids
My father served three years of combat in WWII. He was in North Africa, France and Italy. Your short story has a vivid use of words that describe what took place that day. Your words capture the horror of being in a war zone.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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My father served three years of combat in WWII. He was in North Africa, France and Italy. Your short story has a vivid use of words that describe what took place that day. Your words capture the horror of being in a war zone.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share.
John
