Comment from Aiona

Excellent

This poem fits the 5-7-5 syllable structure, and incorporates both sight "gaze" and scent "perfumed" and feelings "love." Or is it lust? LOL! The poem leaves much to the imagination. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 19-May-2023

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reply by the author on 19-May-2023

Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from sunnilicious

Exceptional

That was a beautifully written poem. You met the 5-7-5 syllable count too. Good. Well thought out and clearly written. Concrete imagery as it is very focused an somewhat romantic, (but pull the miracle sheets off and wash them now).

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Wow! Thank you so very much for your encouraging comments and wonderful stars, (sheets changed-I promise) as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Oh, so very good and tastefully done, Kahpot. Great
job. Your words created sensual imagery just from
reading even no image had been added. Great job
with the syllable count per line.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Thank you so very much for your encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This romantic 5-7-5, Just For Now, has the proper formatting and connects the cloudy, scented sheets to the lover who is currently elsewhere, but may return. Nice.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from jaded831

Exceptional

Beautifully written, your poem expresses not only love, but passion. I need to read them all, but yours is on top. Not only that it sparks deep emotion. Great entry, your poem stands alone with or without a picture. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Wow! Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and six stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Caitriona

Excellent

I like the honesty in this 5-7-5 poem. Even without the picture, you can see yourself, looking back and looking at sheets, and remembering. Definitely Recommend! Great job.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023

Thank you so very much

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Romance writing prompt contest. Excellent 5-7-5 construction. Good syllables count and connectionbetweenlines.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

It's very romantic with great imagery.

Goodluck

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry into the 5-7-5 romance contest. Your text is a great size for reading. Your message is stated with clarity and is easy to understand. Your spacing of text in the poem box is well-done. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest. I voted for this one.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023

Thank you so very much

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 15-Mar-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

Clever and certainly paints the picture.Photo totally suitable. Meets competition criteria and is a strong contender. All the best and have a great day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023

Thank you so very much

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a romantic and loving write of a memory that took place and the hope that it will be repeated, a fine, rather intimate post for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023

Thank you very much, very understanding