Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

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 Comment Written 13-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023

Thank you, Karen ! Sal :))

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Exceptional

Another great chapter, Sally! A healing of the brain tumor is certainly an unexpected, yet most welcomed, development in your plot.

We see the evil Fee attempting to commit an atrocity stopped by the powerful angels.

Great job, my friend,
Hugs,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023

Rhonda! Double goodness from my Texas friend! Thank you so much for this and the generous stars. I know how hard they are to come by. I appreciate you so much and your constant encouragement in my writing. I am blessed.

Sending you my very best today, and love and blessings always,
Sal xoxo?s

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

A great chapter Sally starting with Tommy's good news and then with the evil F.E.E trying his best to get rid of his staff by locking them in the cellar and lighting it up. A good finish with the rescue by Patience. Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023

Dear Valda, Thank you for the lovely review of my book chapter. It is most appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

The reader hopes this is true: "The look on his face confirmed what I had sensed to be true: the Lord healed me the night before I married Willa." & "Unable to contain myself, I said, "The tumor's gone, isn't it?" I like how you build up the tension in reader. You have a great talent for playing with the reader: "Fitzgerald Edward Elling was filthy"
A great ending.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you for the lovely review of my book chapter, dear Liz. It's always a pleasure to receive your kind and generous feedback. Blessings,
Sal XOs

reply by Liz O'Neill on 26-Mar-2023

Sally, I would hope you always receive kind reviews.

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Unfortunately, I don?t always receive kind reviews, but for the most part, I do. That keeps me going. Thank you, again.
Sal XOs

reply by Liz O'Neill on 26-Mar-2023

I was glad to see Debi Pick Marquette did an article called
Good & Bad Reviewing. It is discouraging, but when I realize they don't know my voice like my favorite reviewer do, I move on.

Comment from Julie Lau

Excellent

You write extremely well, and the dialogue is believable and natural. You kept the excitement and action on the boil. Well done! Julie Lau

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments, Julie! Both mean so much! Blessings.
Sally :))

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

There should be more Patience in this world. It would be an amazing world to live in. And that Fee is something else. Hopefully they'll get him and put him away for years to come. A good chapter.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you so much, Rosemary! Blessings back to you and yours.
Sal XOs

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

Well, this is an exciting chapter! It's interesting how a good man like Simon could be the son of a terrible person like Fee. I do hope Simon and Candace get together in the end. I'm also quite pleased that Tommy's tumor is gone. (I suspected that might happen.) I'm looking forward to the next installment.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments. Both mean so much! Blessings!
Sal XOs

reply by Mary Shifman on 27-Mar-2023

You are welcome.

reply by Mary Shifman on 27-Mar-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from Rebecca Roberts1

Excellent

It's always a good thing to leave the reader hanging. You certainly did in this chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Your villain is so unlikeable.
Thanks for the great read.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter, Rebecca! How kind you are! Blessings back to you and yours.
Sal :)))

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

It is incredibly a miracle that Tommy is tumor free. Now he can share his life with his wife!
The fee lit the fire in hopes to get revenge I hope they catch him!

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you for the kind review, dear Barbara! So wonderful to see you!
Blessings,
Sal XOs

reply by country ranch writer on 26-Mar-2023

Hi Sal,
Hope this finds you all doing fine.

reply by country ranch writer on 26-Mar-2023

Hi Sal,
Hope this finds you all doing fine.

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

I love it when Fee's evil deeds are thwarted by Patience! It sounds like a whole lot of miracles going on around Tommy - a feel-good ending sounds like it's coming our way and justice will be served where due.

Nice chapter, Sal. How many more do we have to go? I'm not on FS every day now but I want to be sure I don't miss any of these chapters.

Take care, my friend:-)

xx
Pam

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Dear Pam, thank you for the kind review of my book chapter. Sorry to be so late with this a big week for me. Blessings to you always.
Sal XOs