Baloney
It's a poem about Baloney (Bologna for those who know)3 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Hah! A rhyming ode to "Baloney" -- and may I say (if it's German Baloney" I'm a huge fan! I grew up on the "delicacy. My mom and dad used to fry it as a special treat! Great rhymes here and 14 and 15 syllable lines that have an easy "beat" to them making this a fun read! You need more readers! More fans! I think I'll jump on board that train.
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Hah! A rhyming ode to "Baloney" -- and may I say (if it's German Baloney" I'm a huge fan! I grew up on the "delicacy. My mom and dad used to fry it as a special treat! Great rhymes here and 14 and 15 syllable lines that have an easy "beat" to them making this a fun read! You need more readers! More fans! I think I'll jump on board that train.
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023
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Thank you! I?m happy you checked this one out, I love bologna! You are too kind, I really appreciate you reading my stuff and leaving such a swell review! Best wishes to you!
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Thanks. I like your wit and originality...and that's no baloney!
Comment from Jim Wile
I love it, Mike! Just my kind of poem. Poetry doesn't have to be deep and abstractly meaningful to be enjoyed, at least not by me. Give me a humorous take on a mundane thing like baloney any day! Terrific start here on FanStory. I look forward to more of your posts. Jim
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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I love it, Mike! Just my kind of poem. Poetry doesn't have to be deep and abstractly meaningful to be enjoyed, at least not by me. Give me a humorous take on a mundane thing like baloney any day! Terrific start here on FanStory. I look forward to more of your posts. Jim
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you Jim, I look forward to posting more!
Comment from JT traveller
Congratulations on your first post!
A humorous, well composed poem. The meter and rhyme sit well.
I used to think that baloney was made from the leftovers after other products had been made from the meat of an animal, until I saw a show on making baloney. What was left over was made into sausages! I haven't eaten a sausage since.
I appreciated your double entendre to conclude your poem.
Best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Congratulations on your first post!
A humorous, well composed poem. The meter and rhyme sit well.
I used to think that baloney was made from the leftovers after other products had been made from the meat of an animal, until I saw a show on making baloney. What was left over was made into sausages! I haven't eaten a sausage since.
I appreciated your double entendre to conclude your poem.
Best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure.
