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Living

Cinquain - 2,4,6,8,2 (3rd place)

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I agree with you here, rather than being a slave to a life you don't like, why not create a life you love living in. Everyone can make changes to improve their life and the time started now as we only get one chance, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Dolly. You hit the nail on the head with your review of my cinquain poem. Well said and thank you for your support. ~DDxo
Comment from Pantygynt
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I wanted to reply in similar vein, just using the cinquain below, but it did not use sufficient characters to appease Fanstorian gods. So I had to write this bit as well.

Sunk in a cinquain in reply:

But if
you feel sometimes
that your life itself sucks
should you then on others' lives go
sucking?

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Hmm, all I can say is I am thankful for the review lol.
Comment from JT traveller
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Oh yeah! I love this bold statement l. That is the only way to live life.

Beautiful cinquain, well thought out and packs a punch.

Best of luck. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Jacqueline :-). Here?s to living life to the max. ~DD
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is an extremely clever offering that successfully overcomes the constraints of these short, precisely formatted poem forms. I enjoyed my read very much. Thanks for sharing and good luck. kay

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Kay for the positive feedback on - Living. Much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I really like that! What a clever turnaround of that expression. Now I intend to do the same! Lol. This is a very well written cinquain, my friend. Very well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Sandra, thank you for your positive review. Life is for Living :-) ~DDxx
Comment from Bill Schott
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This cinquain, Living, has the proper formatting and avows that if anyone is going to overwork, underpay, treat me poorly, and then expect a thank you, it will be me.

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 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Thanks, Bill. I appreciate your review. ~DD
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi DD,
This is a good way to live life. Don't harp on the bad but live to the good.
Positive thinking is always the best way to go.
Good luck in the cinquain contest.
Keep writing and stay healhy,
Joan

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 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
    Thank you kindly, Joan. Your review is much appreciated :-) ~DD