Good Morning
An imaginary day in the life of a TV Host33 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
This one is different, Nolan. The rhyme in the first four lines is a great start. This might give you an idea of how to portray the end of the show.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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This one is different, Nolan. The rhyme in the first four lines is a great start. This might give you an idea of how to portray the end of the show.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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You re absolutely correct. I had not given thought as to how it should or even could end. Now you have given me much food for thought.
Comment from Caitriona
Love this! Definitely satirical and such an easy read. So fun with the delete and insert line. This flows well and is seamless for the reader. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Love this! Definitely satirical and such an easy read. So fun with the delete and insert line. This flows well and is seamless for the reader. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much. You have no idea how grateful I am to have a fleeting idea become so successfully received.
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Please check out the THE WIND KISS on the "Gone Away" contest. I had to lengthen my original, but I hope you like it.
Thanks, C.
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I will definitely check it out.
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Thank you. I did not realize this is a blind contest, so no worries. Thank you!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words made me smile! And I am sure this is exactly what
goes on behind the scenes! The poem is thought provoking, interesting, descriptive and creative. Thank you for the author's notes - I believe this goes in many places! The artwork is perfect and goes well with this poem!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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The author's words made me smile! And I am sure this is exactly what
goes on behind the scenes! The poem is thought provoking, interesting, descriptive and creative. Thank you for the author's notes - I believe this goes in many places! The artwork is perfect and goes well with this poem!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you. It does not really take much of a stretch based on what paying attention discloses.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I really enjoyed following you in imagination. It reads as though it is currently happening, and you might be present for the change of hosts. It's not easy to present a whole poem of action, but you did it.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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I really enjoyed following you in imagination. It reads as though it is currently happening, and you might be present for the change of hosts. It's not easy to present a whole poem of action, but you did it.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you. I did not realize that it was what I did until you pointed it out. Wow!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good poem. The text is a great size. The message is stated with clarity and is easy to understand. This is how I too remember the start of TV newscasts in movies.
Your poem box needs to be extended. Drop the first line down one space and go to the end of the last line and hit enter once. A poem presents better with spacing around the text. The visual fits well. Thanks for sharing.
P.S Great new profile photo.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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This is a good poem. The text is a great size. The message is stated with clarity and is easy to understand. This is how I too remember the start of TV newscasts in movies.
Your poem box needs to be extended. Drop the first line down one space and go to the end of the last line and hit enter once. A poem presents better with spacing around the text. The visual fits well. Thanks for sharing.
P.S Great new profile photo.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you on all counts. I had to be reminded that presentation is vital in all areas of display.
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You are welcome. Don't worry I will remind you. 😁
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I know, and I count on you to do just that.
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😀😀
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very well done, and oh, by the way I wish the thought would be executed by our television commentators who egregiously lean in one direction.
It's been a while since I have seen a release from you, and honestly, I was thinking that a day or two ago while reviewing my buddy list.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Very well done, and oh, by the way I wish the thought would be executed by our television commentators who egregiously lean in one direction.
It's been a while since I have seen a release from you, and honestly, I was thinking that a day or two ago while reviewing my buddy list.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your review comments. You will never be bombarded by my posts. I only post when I feel I have something new or novel to say. I do not post unless I can promote my post. You will never see a post from with the barest minimum of 2 cents. Why even bother?
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I bother because my creativity value is stuck wide open, and I like reading what I write, and believe someone else may like it too, but I understand. Reviews are rarely given with a two cent pledge but I read what I can and if the piece is worthy of comment booty or not I say something. Be well. It was nice hearing from you.
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Thank you. I am not saying I won't read and review an unsupported work. I am saying that it shows a lack of belief in your own work if you are not willing to promote it.
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I can see that too, but I'd have to review from sunrise to sunset to afford promoting all I write or buy in with cash, but I have always believed in a penny saved is ...
Comment from kahpot
You have certainly inflicted some imagination here, "delete Harry insert Jacob" on this I might still be waiting for the countdown, a wonderful and very intriguing write, very well presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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You have certainly inflicted some imagination here, "delete Harry insert Jacob" on this I might still be waiting for the countdown, a wonderful and very intriguing write, very well presented****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you, and do not worry about Harry, he knows the game and will survive just fine.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
While totally imaginary, your well-written poem, I am certain, has some truth to it. Particularly smaller stations where someone starting out thinks they have it made landing a spot, not realizing it is a game of musical chairs. They are gone the next day.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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While totally imaginary, your well-written poem, I am certain, has some truth to it. Particularly smaller stations where someone starting out thinks they have it made landing a spot, not realizing it is a game of musical chairs. They are gone the next day.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thank you Mary. Yes, such are the vagaries of life.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, there's probably so much going on behind the scenes that it's impossible to ever know exactly what is going on, and I'm sure we wouldn't want to know it all. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Yes, there's probably so much going on behind the scenes that it's impossible to ever know exactly what is going on, and I'm sure we wouldn't want to know it all. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thanks Ric. I appreciate your review comments.
Comment from Jim Wile
This was a nicely written poem about what I'm sure does happen in newsrooms every morning. I like the way you poke fun at these news stories with your line, "Delete Harry, insert Jacob," as if there's nothing new , but only the names have changed. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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This was a nicely written poem about what I'm sure does happen in newsrooms every morning. I like the way you poke fun at these news stories with your line, "Delete Harry, insert Jacob," as if there's nothing new , but only the names have changed. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thank you, I have watched the progression of many late night/early morning newscasters on the ABC TV Network. The people have gone on to fame and prominent roles in the TV industry. Their success stories have inspired very much this poem.
