Novella - Unwanted Dog
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You're lucky that you didn't get hurt yourself. What a little rascal you were. I'm sure it was a lesson to learn for yourself and friend. She probably decided she didn't want the adventure to happen again.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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You're lucky that you didn't get hurt yourself. What a little rascal you were. I'm sure it was a lesson to learn for yourself and friend. She probably decided she didn't want the adventure to happen again.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Much appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from eliz100
I am sure looking back you can find humor in this story. Leave it to a thirteen-year-old in love or lust to get into trouble this way. There is no room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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I am sure looking back you can find humor in this story. Leave it to a thirteen-year-old in love or lust to get into trouble this way. There is no room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Brett,
What a great story. We all have done things when we were young that we wished we could get a do over on. You can probably thank your lucky stars you didn't get a chance to sew your oats so soon or you might have been dealing with a different problem altogether. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Hello Brett,
What a great story. We all have done things when we were young that we wished we could get a do over on. You can probably thank your lucky stars you didn't get a chance to sew your oats so soon or you might have been dealing with a different problem altogether. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yeah, you sure might have shot yourself in the foot for lack of a better way of putting it. And in the same move proved to Jennifer that you probably weren't the best young man to get mixed up with, unless she wanted to get into trouble. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Yeah, you sure might have shot yourself in the foot for lack of a better way of putting it. And in the same move proved to Jennifer that you probably weren't the best young man to get mixed up with, unless she wanted to get into trouble. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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No doubt. But, lesson learned. Still, had fun that day, until Dusty got home and it all hit the fan! So appreciate your comments.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Kid! I swear they have to be watched every minute! I think what you did was typical of a youngster your age at the time. Children are in such a rush to grow up and get out of that most wonderful time of life. Well done Brett. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Kid! I swear they have to be watched every minute! I think what you did was typical of a youngster your age at the time. Children are in such a rush to grow up and get out of that most wonderful time of life. Well done Brett. Nancy:)
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
You certainly sound like a normal boy, even though I'm sure you didn't feel like one. Living in the country, I started driving just as soon as my feet reached the pedals. I think I was sitting so close to the steering wheel I could barely turn it. You did a great job. Have a great day. Shirley
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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You certainly sound like a normal boy, even though I'm sure you didn't feel like one. Living in the country, I started driving just as soon as my feet reached the pedals. I think I was sitting so close to the steering wheel I could barely turn it. You did a great job. Have a great day. Shirley
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I keep checking if you had done one of the club challenges but it seems you're writing an interesting autobiography. I'm glad that you and your date were safe. Apparently, you did not have enough driving training yet. I don't know who Dusty is but am impressed that you admitted your fault.
"Who's stockpiled piece of junk is that? (Whose)
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Well, I keep checking if you had done one of the club challenges but it seems you're writing an interesting autobiography. I'm glad that you and your date were safe. Apparently, you did not have enough driving training yet. I don't know who Dusty is but am impressed that you admitted your fault.
"Who's stockpiled piece of junk is that? (Whose)
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Dusty is the man who adopted me. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Wendy G
Great story Brett. I thought you were both going to end up in the creek! Or that at the very least the old jalopy would! Now, I wonder why J didn't want anything more to do with you?!!
Wendy
Typo: "Who's stockpiled piece of junk ..." should be "whose" (Because "who's" is short for "who is ...")
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Great story Brett. I thought you were both going to end up in the creek! Or that at the very least the old jalopy would! Now, I wonder why J didn't want anything more to do with you?!!
Wendy
Typo: "Who's stockpiled piece of junk ..." should be "whose" (Because "who's" is short for "who is ...")
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Appreciate the catch and the review.
Comment from BethShelby
You didn't say if you were serious about killing yourself for your thirteenth birthday. Maybe you meant you went about doing things which could have killed out or made Dusty do it. You also did say the experiment you wanted to perform on Jennifer but since you since you mentioned hormonal vibes maybe I don't need to know. You were probably a typical threeteen year. All I've ever know act have done some stupid thing. I'm enjoying it. thirty miles southest of Nashville, (southeast)
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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You didn't say if you were serious about killing yourself for your thirteenth birthday. Maybe you meant you went about doing things which could have killed out or made Dusty do it. You also did say the experiment you wanted to perform on Jennifer but since you since you mentioned hormonal vibes maybe I don't need to know. You were probably a typical threeteen year. All I've ever know act have done some stupid thing. I'm enjoying it. thirty miles southest of Nashville, (southeast)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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I went about things that could have put an end to me before I was grown. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
It seems to be a boys rite of passage to "borrow" the family car. But, it was a good lesson to learn when you're young. It's the kind of lesson that sticks with you. Great installment. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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It seems to be a boys rite of passage to "borrow" the family car. But, it was a good lesson to learn when you're young. It's the kind of lesson that sticks with you. Great installment. Gretchen
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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I only pulled that stunt one time. I really wanted to spend time with Jennifer, but, alas, did not occur. Appreciate the review.