Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "You Asked!"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
9 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, I love this my friend, it's a marvellous way to have a laugh at one's own expense, I think this is a wonderful entry in this contest, beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Heh heh, I love this my friend, it's a marvellous way to have a laugh at one's own expense, I think this is a wonderful entry in this contest, beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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thank you Roy!
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A pleasure
Comment from mermaids
You have created a unique one line poem here. I am sure many can relate to your words. Life does have many challenges we are aware of until we encounter them. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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You have created a unique one line poem here. I am sure many can relate to your words. Life does have many challenges we are aware of until we encounter them. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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thank you so much!
Comment from Julie Lau
Wow, that's certainly out there! Yet it's also very funny in a dark, sick way. If only we knew what life was going to have in store for us, hey? I would certainly like to be able to go back and cancel some of the really yucky bits. The messy writing-style text is perfect for the message. Well done.
Julie Lau
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Wow, that's certainly out there! Yet it's also very funny in a dark, sick way. If only we knew what life was going to have in store for us, hey? I would certainly like to be able to go back and cancel some of the really yucky bits. The messy writing-style text is perfect for the message. Well done.
Julie Lau
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thank you Julie. You got it😀
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your great feedback!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Love this! It made me smile which is top of my list of requirements. So original and humorous but the mystery lies in whether or not it is intended to be taken that way. Very clever. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Love this! It made me smile which is top of my list of requirements. So original and humorous but the mystery lies in whether or not it is intended to be taken that way. Very clever. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you Debbie. You?re right on
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Thanks so much for getting the humor. Just a little creepy. Haha
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was hmm..... interesting. A certain mystery to it, though I don't know the background. Judging by the dedication, it has something to do with your relationship with your mom, perhaps? Our work is often subject to multiple interpretations.
This was certainly an avant-garde rendition of the contest topic, and I wish you luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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This was hmm..... interesting. A certain mystery to it, though I don't know the background. Judging by the dedication, it has something to do with your relationship with your mom, perhaps? Our work is often subject to multiple interpretations.
This was certainly an avant-garde rendition of the contest topic, and I wish you luck in the booths.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your insightful review..
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, to each their own, right? Your one line was difficult to
ascertain if you were serious or not. But then, your pen name
may be a clue.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Well, to each their own, right? Your one line was difficult to
ascertain if you were serious or not. But then, your pen name
may be a clue.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thank you
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Nice
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Thank you so much Jan!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness? Really? I would love the chance to do it all again as long as I kept the knowledge I have learned so far, you made me smile here, love the humour in this piece, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Oh my goodness? Really? I would love the chance to do it all again as long as I kept the knowledge I have learned so far, you made me smile here, love the humour in this piece, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thank you for seeing the humor!
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I think I?m sending more than one thank you. Sorry about that
Comment from rjuselius
Indeed, life is strife. And yet you have to remember how many lives you have changed to the better. Noone is replacable.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck in the contest!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Indeed, life is strife. And yet you have to remember how many lives you have changed to the better. Noone is replacable.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck in the contest!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your insightful comments and generous rating..
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Thank you a million !!!
Comment from JT traveller
Without explanatory notes your poem left me uncertain if you were the child or the birthing mother.
A good poem that clearly expressed your unhappiness. A photograph or illustration may serve to make your words stand out a little more.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Without explanatory notes your poem left me uncertain if you were the child or the birthing mother.
A good poem that clearly expressed your unhappiness. A photograph or illustration may serve to make your words stand out a little more.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Im 61 years old. Haha