Unfortunately
A two-line poem8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-line poem, Unfortunately, has the proper formatting and suggests that water would need to rise to the mountain tops. If so, it's check out time.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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This two-line poem, Unfortunately, has the proper formatting and suggests that water would need to rise to the mountain tops. If so, it's check out time.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Quite a sobering two line poem and one difficult to contemplate though sadly our climate is changing rapidly.
Well expressed, deeply meaningful and a wake up call for mankind.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Quite a sobering two line poem and one difficult to contemplate though sadly our climate is changing rapidly.
Well expressed, deeply meaningful and a wake up call for mankind.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Two Line Poetry Contest. You are right, we are changing the seasons and intensity with global warming.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Excellent entry for the Two Line Poetry Contest. You are right, we are changing the seasons and intensity with global warming.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Alan Tryens
I don't usually like 2 line poetry especially ones that don't rhyme and I have never reviewed one before. Yours not only rhymes but makes an important statement about global warming in just its 2 lines. Good job.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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I don't usually like 2 line poetry especially ones that don't rhyme and I have never reviewed one before. Yours not only rhymes but makes an important statement about global warming in just its 2 lines. Good job.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Ricky1024
Noah-If-Icall presented, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry!. Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Noah-If-Icall presented, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry!. Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from irishauthorme
Neat thought! God destroyed the world once with water, the Great Flood, and supposedly the next time He will destroy us with fire.
However, in the meantime, if the water does get that high, there will not be much left, unless you are renting a condo on Mount Everest!
Good thought,
irish
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Neat thought! God destroyed the world once with water, the Great Flood, and supposedly the next time He will destroy us with fire.
However, in the meantime, if the water does get that high, there will not be much left, unless you are renting a condo on Mount Everest!
Good thought,
irish
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Julie Lau
Yes, I grasp your point well, as no-one nests higher than the eagle, implying that at this point Earth will be completely covered with water. A point of punctuation however... please remove the apostrophe from waters. Good luck in the contest,
Julie Lau
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Yes, I grasp your point well, as no-one nests higher than the eagle, implying that at this point Earth will be completely covered with water. A point of punctuation however... please remove the apostrophe from waters. Good luck in the contest,
Julie Lau
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The water would have to rise quite high to reach and Eagle's nest but this would be one almighty flood. A frightening thought, a poignant write for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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The water would have to rise quite high to reach and Eagle's nest but this would be one almighty flood. A frightening thought, a poignant write for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much
