Comment from Charles W. Johnson

Excellent

Having launched a couple of my own, it's not such an easy task. It's an emotional moment when your child leave the nest. Nice theme for your two line poem. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023

Thanks for reviewing. I don't know how the birds do it :-)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Birds are always true to their instincts and humans are diverse and unpredictable. I couldn't imagine being without my children or my Grandchildren, they are all special to me, a poignant write, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023

I'd stilll rather be human. Thank you for the review.

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Fantastic commentary on today's society in two well thought out lines. Your words ring so true. My elder brother, who is fifty, still lives with my mother, she is not in need of assistance. She does everything for him instead.

Back to the point...

A fantastic two line poetry competition contender that really does send a clear message. Well composed.

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023

Thanks for your review and for sharing your experience with this not so trendy trend. Sad, really, that those who never leave never get to experience the joy of their own mastery.

reply by JT traveller on 12-Mar-2023

Ah, so true. I wish this was not a blind contest entry. I'd like to become a fan. Have a great day wherever you are.