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First Poems

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Comment from Lobber
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Hello, my friend,
If you are going to give credit, which you should do, why not make it meaningful and useful? This painting was done French artist Jean-Marie Poumeyrol an exponent of the fantastic realism movement. His early works, however, are mostly erotica and hallucinogenic art.
By the way, it is spelled Widipedia with an )i(.
- Lobber

Wikipedia - sorry

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
    We are very knowledgeable thank you very much for your help. I appreciate it. I will definitely do that!
    I'm create art myself many different ways. I've never put forth writing or artwork before 6 weeks ago. Don't know who naive in some appreciate your advice!
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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An interesting, thoughtful and thought provoking post.
Man does have a lot to answer for when it comes to the decline of our Earth.
I do pray for future generations.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    Thank you for taking the time to look at my post. Your comments are always welcome and appreciate it and yes I agree. I know you're hungry there is so much decline it's sad. Thanks again hope you have a great night!
reply by Shirley E Kennedy on 13-Mar-2023
    You're vey welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-A good image and nice presentation.
-Excellent notes, and I agree with you.
-I like how the first line beckons readers
to look at the "earth and despair."
-A good concluding line implying many
have made their bed; now they need to lie in it!!
-A very good entry that is well thought out.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    Thank you so much I'm glad you like it and definitely saw them. I appreciate it so much and thank you also for taking the time to have a look and offer your thoughts and comments. I hope you have a great day!
reply by Pam (respa) on 13-Mar-2023
    You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply. You have a great day, too.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I expect we will not be able to change what is coming with climate change and the world is always evolving. I have been unaffected by it so far but I realise it is real, a poignant write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    Thank you dolly oh wait always appreciative of your comments in your review have a great day!
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
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Living in New England, I can say with certainty that there has been warming. As a child, I could skate on the ponds and watch my brother ice fishing. But the ice in recent years doesn't freeze enough for that.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
    Yes when I was a child there was snow every year now we only get rain. Thank you for your evaluation and for your comments and for taking the time to read it. I really appreciate it have a great day!