Sid
a seventy-five-word story15 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
Very funny. I especially liked these lines:
"Please say you're kidding, Shaun."
"You're kidding, Shaun." said Shaun. Since the car started I'm guessing he scared the oil and gas with his funny face. LOL
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Very funny. I especially liked these lines:
"Please say you're kidding, Shaun."
"You're kidding, Shaun." said Shaun. Since the car started I'm guessing he scared the oil and gas with his funny face. LOL
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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I tinkered with the idea that Shaun was the only person in the car anyway.
Comment from ESOSTINE
Not sure I fully understood the conversation. Seems to be a continuation of a story and a double character, the funny Sully (Sid). Thanks for sharing your story, and good luck in the contest. Well done, dear Bill.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Not sure I fully understood the conversation. Seems to be a continuation of a story and a double character, the funny Sully (Sid). Thanks for sharing your story, and good luck in the contest. Well done, dear Bill.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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There is likely room here to tag this scene to a dozen stories. Thanks for looking in.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I guess we never know anyone. And especially, those with dual personalities, alter egos, or whatever you want to call them when talking to others. Don't call me Ric, this afternoon I'm Bubba. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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I guess we never know anyone. And especially, those with dual personalities, alter egos, or whatever you want to call them when talking to others. Don't call me Ric, this afternoon I'm Bubba. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Bubba
Comment from JT traveller
So humurous in so few words. Well done on sticking to the word limit and providing us with some tongue in cheek humour to boot. A great flash fiction piece.
Best of luck Bill. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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So humurous in so few words. Well done on sticking to the word limit and providing us with some tongue in cheek humour to boot. A great flash fiction piece.
Best of luck Bill. Jacqueline
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Jacqueline
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I'm a little confused about who is talking. Now I read it again and I got it. It's your usual silly (Sully) story. But I like the story form better than the script form. This car repair genie is very useful.
Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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I'm a little confused about who is talking. Now I read it again and I got it. It's your usual silly (Sully) story. But I like the story form better than the script form. This car repair genie is very useful.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Lisa
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Bill,
I love the dark humor in this great 75-word story.
It's ominous and quirky. In the end, we wonder, 'was another hitchhiker spared'?
Good luck with this one, Bill.
Cindy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Bill,
I love the dark humor in this great 75-word story.
It's ominous and quirky. In the end, we wonder, 'was another hitchhiker spared'?
Good luck with this one, Bill.
Cindy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Cindy
Comment from BethShelby
Maybe we all need alter for times when things wrong, and especially if we're feeling the urge to murder someone. If we go though with it we could blame in alter and mayby plea temporary insanity. Nice flash.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Maybe we all need alter for times when things wrong, and especially if we're feeling the urge to murder someone. If we go though with it we could blame in alter and mayby plea temporary insanity. Nice flash.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Beth
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderfully intriguing read, as I am not sure whether I am happy the car started or not, for Shaun's sake, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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What a wonderfully intriguing read, as I am not sure whether I am happy the car started or not, for Shaun's sake, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thanks, kahpot
Comment from judiverse
It seems that Shaun needs his alter-ego to keep him out of trouble. If the car starts at the end of the story, I take it that Sully is safe. I assume Sully is a hitchhiker but don't really know that. What does Shaun have against hitchhikers? This calls for lots of speculation, but that's what flash fiction is about. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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It seems that Shaun needs his alter-ego to keep him out of trouble. If the car starts at the end of the story, I take it that Sully is safe. I assume Sully is a hitchhiker but don't really know that. What does Shaun have against hitchhikers? This calls for lots of speculation, but that's what flash fiction is about. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Judi
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, I think we all curse when we have car trouble. I remember when I was running out of petrol once and I was literally praying as I was driving that I would get the the garage before the car conked out! I made it! I enjoyed your fun write Bill, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Ha ha ha, I think we all curse when we have car trouble. I remember when I was running out of petrol once and I was literally praying as I was driving that I would get the the garage before the car conked out! I made it! I enjoyed your fun write Bill, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Dolly
